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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。:

Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened, which causes serious damage. It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life.

In this case, we should take effective measure which can solve this problem. Firstly, our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules, and pay attention to food safety, because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless. Secondly, you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts. Thirdly, our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying.

As far as I am concerned, improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound.

 

1.在 public之前加 a。 2. causes改为caused 3. firstly 改为 first 4. measure改为measures 5. or改为and 6. of去掉。 7. you改为 we。 8. that改为where 9. very 改为 so 10. anyone改为everyone 【解析】 本文是一篇校园信息。最近,自从一系列暴力袭击事件发生,校园安全已经成为一个公众关注的焦点,这造成了严重的损害。它使我们意识到安全在我们的日常生活中总是第一位的。 1.考查不定冠词。句意:自从一系列暴力袭击事件发生以来,校园安全已经成为一个公众关注的问题,这些袭击造成了严重的破坏。结合句意可知在 public之前加 a。 2.考查时态。句意:自从一系列暴力袭击事件发生以来,校园安全已经成为一个公众关注的问题,这些袭击造成了严重的破坏。此处since“自从---以来”引导时间状语从句,从句中用一般过去时态,故把causes改为caused。 3.考查副词。句意:它使我们意识到安全在我们的日常生活中总是第一位的。此处不是列举事物,故把firstly 改为 first。 4.考查固定搭配。take measures“采取措施”,故把measure改为measures。 5.考查并列连词。句意:我们的学生应该意识到我们必须遵守我们的学校和交通规则,并注意食品安全,因为许多事故发生只是因为我们太粗心。此处是并列的递进关系而不是选择关系,故把or改为and。 6.考查原因状语从句引导词。句意:我们的学生应该意识到我们必须遵守我们的学校和交通规则,并注意食品安全,因为许多事故发生只是因为我们太粗心。此处是because引导的原因状语从句,而because of后面不能跟完整的句子,故把of去掉。 7.考查人称代词。句意:我们应该接受安全方面的训练,以便在面对冲突时保持冷静。结合上下文句意可知把you改为 we。 8.考查定语从句。句意:我们的政府和学校应该提供环境,我们的学生可以专心于学习。此处surroundings作先行词,在后面的定语从句中作地点状语,故把that改为where。 9.考查so---that引导的结果状语从句。句意:在我看来,改善校园安全是如此重要,我们都应该尽我们最大的努力,使每个人在校园安全和健康。结合句意可知此处是so---that引导的结果状语从句,故把very 改为 so。 10.考查指人的不定代词。句意:在我看来,改善校园安全是如此重要,我们都应该尽我们最大的努力,使每个人在校园安全和健康。结合句意可知把anyone改为everyone。
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