Question

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim对中华传统文化很感兴趣，经常与你讨论这方面的话题。最近你参加了一次相关活动，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 介绍这次活动；

2. 说明参加的理由；

3. 表达参加后的感受。

注意：1. 词数不少于50;

2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Jim,

How’ s everything going? I know you’ re interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I’ m writing

to tell you one of my recent experiences.

I visited the Capital Museum during the winter vacation and explored Chinese history and culture.I chose it as my destination because it houses a variety of exhibits, like paintings, antiques, crafts

and so on. Besides, the architecture of the museum features the combination of tradition and modernity.

The visit is indeed worthwhile. I’ m amazed at the wisdom of Chinese people and impressed by the brilliance of Chinese civilization.

Feel an itch for the visit? I’ d like to show you around the museum. Waiting for your coming!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息，你的美国笔友 Jim 对中华传统文化很感兴趣， 经常与你讨论这方面的话题。最近你参加了一次相关活动， 请你给他一封邮件， 内容包括：介绍这次活动；说明参加的理由；表达参加后的感受。写作时注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象；要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写；根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应用一般现在时态。注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】

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