Question

假如你是某外语特色学校的高三学生李华，临近毕业，受学生会邀请在全校师生会上发言，请用英语写一篇演讲稿，要点如下：

1.简单回顾过去

2.表示感谢

3.展望未来

注意：1.词数80左右；所给开头不计入词数。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

I am honored to make a speech here. During the past three years, we have experienced a lot. I still remember the moment when we first stepped into this school with passion and hope. I still remember the moment we cried for our failures in exams, rebuilt our faith in our struggles and cheered our success in competitions. From the beginning to the end, we were not alone. We were backed up by our parents and teachers and friends. Thank you for all your support and encouragement.

Graduation is a beginning rather than an end. We were challenged and we will be challenged. Now, we are starting a new journey. With an undying hope, we guarantee you a never-regret life.

That’s all, thank you.

【解析】

本文是一篇开放类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，临近毕业，受学生会邀请在全校师生会上发言，写一篇演讲稿回顾过去，表示感谢并展望未来。文章要点基本由考生自行组织，总体难度较大。

第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一篇演讲稿，要求考生在演讲稿中简单回顾过去，表示感谢，展望未来。文章以第一人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1.简单回顾过去：高中三年经历很多，考试失败、重树信心；2.表示感谢：感谢老师和父母亲的支持；3.展望未来：毕业只是一个开始，一定会努力开始新征程。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为experience a lot、step into this school with passion and hope、cry for failures、rebuild our faith、back up、support and encouragement、start a new journey等。写作时注意演讲稿的格式和惯用语。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。