假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Dear Mr. Xie,
I’m very exciting to write to you to express my thanks. I am Li Hua, one of the poor children who was crying for knowledge, but couldn’t afford the school fees because my father was ill or my family was deeply in debt. Thank you for give me generous support so that I could have the chance go back to school. Has it not been for the support, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. Your help makes much difference to me. I am sure to spread the love to help people in the need.
In brief, my appreciation for your kindness can never be expressed in word. Please accept my sincerely gratitude.
Yours,
Li Hua
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
When Kate’s car ran out of gas on a highway one night six weeks ago, she got into 1. panic. “I thought I could make it all the way home, but 2. (apparent) I was wrong,” Kate recalled. “I drove to the side of the road and got out, 3. (plan) to walk to the nearest gas station. That’s when I met Johnny, a homeless man sitting nearby. Johnny stopped me. Concerned about my 4. (secure), he told me to get back in the car and lock the doors. I obeyed. A few minutes later, he came back with a gas can that he bought with his last $20.”“5.was crazy that he would use all his money on someone he didn’t even know,” Kate added. 6. (repay)Johnny, Kate returned many times and gave him some money, food and clothes. But she wanted to do more for this man. “Johnny is generous indeed,” said Kate. “He’s got 7. positive energy that he should be helped.” 8. (touch) by Johnny’s selflessness, Kate is now raising money online for him. “To my great delight, donations keep pouring in,” said Kate. “So far, over $100,000 9.(collect). He’s indeed a good guy and deserves everything10.is coming to him.”
Invited to Kim’s graduation ceremony, my wife and I had our two kids with us there. The crowded auditorium (会堂)was filled with people ________ themselves with their speech drafts, who were in ________ of the calling of their names. Each graduate walked across the stage to receive this piece of paper that ________ his or her academic accomplishment.
Kim looked up at us and was trying to control the tears, but in ________. She was not doing a good job of it. ________ emotions is not something that Kim does very well. There she was, ________ in line, prepared to receive her diploma. There was a good ________, but to me it was as if she had been standing in front of me. That simple act of gently rubbing the tears of ________ and looking up at those loved ones really ________ me.
“Kimberly Anne Conway, graduating magna cum laude（以优异成绩）” was ________ over the auditorium’s sound system. She walked ________ across the huge stage and received this piece of paper, the ________ of her effort. I glanced at my wife and saw tears roll gently down as the ________ she had for her sister showed itself on her face.
Kim is not a(n) ________ college graduate. She is 38 years old, and has made an effort, ________ for the past four years. She attended college while working full-time, and ________ to obtain the college degree. Many times she felt like ________, and she would have done so without the ________ from other students.
Everyone in the auditorium was ________ by Kim that day. And I want Kim to know that I have the greatest________ for her.
1.A. enjoying B. comforting C. fanning D. entertaining
2.A. expectation B. honor C. favor D. fear
3.A. promoted B. completed C. evaluated D. represented
4.A. silence B. vain C. doubt D. peace
5.A. Putting off B. Turning down C. Suffering from D. Holding back
6.A. running B. standing C. jumping D. jogging
7.A. excuse B. chance C. distance D. approach
8.A. achievement B. amazement C. disappointment D. punishment
9.A. interrupted B. convinced C. reminded D. touched
10.A. exhibited B. determined C. announced D. predicted
11.A. curiously B. cautiously C. anxiously D. proudly
12.A. impression B. appreciation C. recognition D. influence
13.A. love B. confusion C. sadness D. prediction
14.A. enthusiastic B. average C. creative D. positive
15.A. especially B. specially C. eventually D. initially
16.A. happened B. continued C. failed D. struggled
17.A. explaining B. quitting C. complaining D. apologizing
18.A. ignorance B. chance C. encouragement D. agreement
19.A. inspired B. instructed C. comforted D. acknowledged
20.A. patience B. respect C. responsibility D. tolerance
Grade 3 high school students are graduating next summer. Many of them will go to university. The transition from high school to college is challenging. 1.
Your opinions and outlook on college matter. 2. Actually your attitude about whether attending college will have a positive influence on your life is a strong predictor of academic performance.
3.Your success in college depends, in part, on surrounding yourself with people who can support you and make you have fun. So try to take an active part in extracurricular（课外的）activities so that you can have a smoother adjustment to college.
Don’t be afraid to talk to your professors or teaching assistants. 4. This means trying to find the answers on your own first, but then contacting those who can help you when you can’t. That is what they’re there for! Your professors and teaching assistants want to see you succeed in their classes.
Be confident. Feeling anxiety about communicating with peers, professors and speaking up in class may be a problem for you. 5. The more you speak up in class, the easier it becomes.
A．Hold onto high school friendships.
B．Be open to making new friends on campus.
C．And successful adjustment to college has lifelong effects.
D．Successful adjustment is about reaching out for help when you need it.
E．Family support can give you comfort and assistance when classes get hard.
F．One of the best ways to increase your communication confidence is to practice.
G．So try to face the uncertainty that goes along with going to college with enthusiasm.
Most people like to escape the summer heat with a trip to the beach or a swim in the local pool, but here’s a better choice for you: Coudersport Ice Mine.
The mine was a roadside attraction in Pennsylvania’s Appalachian Mountains for many years until it was suddenly closed down for some reason. But after being closed for nearly a quarter of a century, this hidden summer getaway was once again open to the public in 2014, reports Living on Earth.
The mine isn’t just a great place to escape the summer heat; it’s also something of an unsolved mystery. Strangely, the cave only produces ice in the summertime, and it tends to produce more ice when the surrounding temperature gets higher. When winter falls and snow covers the hilltops, the ice in the cave melts. The cave is so mysterious that some locals even say (falsely) that the cave is man-made.
Originally discovered in 1894, the mine was first used to store meat and for ice harvesting. By the early 1900s, however, it was changed into a tourist attraction. Inside the cave in the summer it gets cold, like walking into a fridge.
Though the cave remains largely mysterious, there are theories. Experts say that cold winter air gets into the cave through cracks in the rocks, and due to the unusual interconnection of the cracks here, that cold air gets concentrated into the cave. The reason ice only forms in the summer is because of the seasonal humidity (湿度) increase in the surrounding atmosphere, along with an increase in groundwater, which becomes exposed to the freezing air. In the winter, warm air trapped in the rocks from the summer escapes and melts the ice.
Part of the charm of the Coudersort Ice Mine, though, is that it keeps much of its mystery. Perhaps it’s best to simply think of it as a long-lost hole in the mountain where Old Man Winter sleeps. At any rate, it’s a great place to escape the heat of summer. If you’re interested in checking it out, you can get more information from its Facebook page.
1.What does the history of Coudersport Ice Mine tell us?
A. It had shut down for about 35 years.
B. It had been closed down only once.
C. It used to be open only in the summer.
D. It first attracted attention a century ago.
2.What was the cave originally used for?
A. Producing heat. B. Attracting tourists.
C. Keeping food fresh. D. Storing newly harvested crops.
3.How does the cave work in the summer according to experts?
A. Its cracks trap a lot of water.
B. It produces more cracks in the rocks.
C. Its humidity increases and it gets hotter.
D. The cold air from its cracks freezes the water.
4.What does the author think of the mystery of Coudersport Ice Mine?
A. It should be kept secret forever.
B. It makes the cave more attractive.
C. It gets deeper if you are interested in it.
D. It is related to the tale of Old Man Winter.
With so many people in the world telling us we can’t succeed, we need to hear people telling us we can.I remember my high school English teacher telling me not to apply to Cornell University because they wouldn’t accept me and even if they did I wouldn’t be able to do the work. I almost didn’t apply but a few days later I saw Ivan Foldfarb, a former teacher, in the hallway and asked him about Cornell. He said, “If you get in, then you go. You can do it.” His words made all the difference. I applied and was accepted.
Too often we think it’s our role to inject a dose（一次剂量）of “reality” into someone’s life. We think we must point out how bad the economy is and how horrible the job market is and how the sky is falling.
I say there are enough pessimists and “realists” in the world. The world needs more optimists, encouragers, and inspirers. The world needs more people to speak into the hearts of others and say “I believe in you.” “If you have the desire then you also have the power to make it happen.” “Even if you fail, it will lead to something even better.”
When it comes to encouragement I know that every one of us loves working for and with people who bring out the best in us. We love being around people who uplift us and make us feel great.
And while we’ll always remember the negative people who told us we couldn’t accomplish something, we will always cherish and hold a special place in our heart for those who encouraged us.
Today I want to encourage you to be an encourager. Today decide to be that person who instills a positive belief in someone who for that needs to hear your encouraging words. Encourage someone who is feeling down. Fuel your team with your positive energy.
Share encouragement. It matters and we all need it.
1.Why did the author’s English teacher tell him not to apply to Cornell University?
A. Because the author had no talent.
B. Because the author was a bad student.
C. Because the teacher thought little of the author.
D. Because the teacher didn’t want the author to attend university.
2.What can we infer from Paragraph 3?
A. The world is lack of “reality”.
B. The economy is becoming worse and worse.
C. We have to face a negative world every day.
D. We take it for granted that we should reveal “reality”.
3.What does the underlined word “uplift” in Paragraph 5 mean?
A. to increase something.
B. to raise something to a higher position.
C. to give hope or encouragement to somebody.
D. to make somebody unhappy or disappointed.
4.What’s the best title of the passage?
A. Be an encourager. B. Always be optimistic.
C. Failure is the mother of success. D. Get away from negative people.
