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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As is reported that 7 billionth baby was born in October 31st, 2011. However, people don’t seem to be happier about the news. The earth had become too crowed. People are suffering from various problems such as lack for resources, poverty, starvation and so on. Great damage has been causing to earth as human beings struggle for more living space.

I am worried the future of our planet. I hope all the country cooperate and take measures to prevent the population from growing too fast. Besides, people should use natural resources more effective. After all, we have the only one earth.

 

1 As 改为It 2 in 改为on 3 happier 改为happy 4 had 改为has 5 for 改为of 6 causing 改为caused 7 worried后面加about 8 country 改为countries 9 effective改为effectively 10 去掉the 【解析】 本文是一篇新闻报道。据报道,2011年10月31日诞生了第70亿名婴儿。然而,人们似乎对这个消息并不高兴。人们正遭受着各种各样的问题,如缺乏资源、贫困、饥饿等等。作者希望所有国家合作,采取措施防止人口过快增长。毕竟,我们只有一个地球。 1.考查it的用法。句意:据报道,2011年10月31日诞生了第70亿名婴儿。此处是固定句式it is reported that---“据报道---”,其中it是形式主语,真正的主语是that引导的主语从句,故把As 改为It。 2.考查表示年月日的介词。句意:据报道,2011年10月31日诞生了第70亿名婴儿。在某年某月某日,也就是在某日时要用介词on,故把in 改为on。 3.考查形容词原级。句意:然而,人们似乎对这个消息并不高兴。这里没有比较对象,不能用比较级,应该用形容词的原级,故把happier 改为happy。 4.考查时态。句意:地球已经变得太拥挤了。结合句意可知句子应该用现在完成时态,故把had 改为has。 5.考查固定搭配。句意:人们正遭受着各种各样的问题,如缺乏资源、贫困、饥饿等等。a lack of---“---的缺乏”,故把for 改为of。 6.考查被动语态。句意:随着人类争夺更多的生存空间,对地球造成了巨大的破坏。此处cause“引起”是及物动词,和句子主语damage之间是一种被动关系,结合句意可知这里用现在完成时态的被动语态,故把causing 改为caused。 7.考查固定短语。句意:我担心我们星球的未来。be worried about“对---担忧”,故在worried后面加about。 8.考查名词复数。句意:我希望所有国家合作,采取措施防止人口过快增长。根据all可知后面的名词用复数形式,故把country 改为countries。 9.考查词性转化。句意:此外,人们应该更有效地利用自然资源。此处是副词修饰动词,故把effective改为effectively。 10.考查句意理解。句意:毕竟,我们只有一个地球。此处only“仅仅,只有”,是副词,结合句意可知去掉the。  
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Over the past years Starbucks coffee 1. (become) a coffee chain store.The cafes don‘t sell coffee; they sell 2. very atmosphere. They offer customers the perfect atmosphere 3. which to take time out and relax.Every single store throughout the world is furnished in a romantic style and 4. (special) meant to be cozy, private and quiet: earth-toned(褐色调)space, fancy wall paper, lovely paintings,5. (amaze) background and irresistible coffee smell…The most fantastic decoration style about Starbucks 6. (design) with oversized chairs and tables outside the store. When 7. comes to a sunny afternoon, I love to take a seat outside,8. (bathe) in the afternoon sunshine, and listening to the lovely music 9. tasting the most terrific Cappuccino. This is exactly what I love in here—the Starbucks! This is the cafe I love not merely because of the cafe itself, but also because of the 10.(feel) it brings me.

 

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It was Sunday and I was returning from my sister’s place. I left_______thinking that I might get a seat in the metro (地铁) and it would be a rather easy_______. But since my bad luck was_______me everywhere, I couldn’t get a seat. I_______and made my way straight to the end of the compartment. I_______there leaning on the side rails. I was feeling very_______about myself.

After few_______I got a seat. Just then, entered a_______lady supported by the metro staff and she sat next to me. I helped her out of the wheelchair and made her sit. I_______my MP4 player and pushed the earpieces just to keep all the________thoughts from my head. Just then I heard the lady calling me. She introduced herself to me and asked about me. I________my best possible smile and answered that much only and pushed ________my earpieces.

She went on________and I had to take out my earpieces and keep them back in my bag. She told me she was a student at Ramakrishna Mission Ashram and goes there________. It gives her peace and strength. The strength to keep going________her to enjoy the human life as much as possible. She then gave me one of Swami’s________and also recited some of verses. She kept on talking for the most of the time and I was very________listening to her.

We were so busy in talking that we didn’t even________our names and I didn’t notice it until we came to our train station and we went our ways.________she left, I opened the booklet she gave and read inspirational________. There and then, I understood that whatever may come, it should not hamper our hopes and our expectations.

1.A. carefully    B. early    C. slowly    D. luckily

2.A. tour    B. voyage    C. travel    D. journey

3.A. approaching    B. attending    C. following    D. attacking

4.A. entered    B. remained    C. stayed    D. insisted

5.A. left    B. lay    C. sat    D. stood

6.A. low    B. confident    C. proud    D. special

7.A. points    B. passages    C. stops    D. seats

8.A. wealthy    B. crippled    C. learned    D. stubborn

9.A. searched for    B. pulled off    C. picked up    D. took out

10.A. positive    B. objective    C. negative    D. valuable

11.A. forced    B. changed    C. created    D. offered

12.A. up    B. ahead    C. down    D. back

13.A. questioning    B. talking    C. arguing    D. quarreling

14.A. constantly    B. commonly    C. instantly    D. regularly

15.A. forbids    B. warns    C. helps    D. reminds

16.A. gifts    B. books    C. records    D. pictures

17.A. attentively    B. angrily    C. nervously    D. anxiously

18.A. remember    B. explain    C. understand    D. exchange

19.A. Since    B. After    C. Before    D. When

20.A. letters    B. notices    C. messages    D. purposes

 

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In an adult’s opinion, sleep is a precious commodity. Usually we don’t feel as if we get enough sleep, which is something we are always longing for.1. For some reason, kids never acknowledge the feeling of “tiredness” as meaning “I need sleep”. What’s more, for many children, sleep represents an unwanted separation from the important people in their lives.2.

How do parents make the problem worse? I hear so many parents complain that they can’t get their children to go to sleep. Let’s take a close look at this concept. We cannot make a child go to sleep, but we can make them go to bed.3. If you even try to control a child’s ability to go to sleep, you are losing the battle before you begin. Even our children themselves cannot really control when they go to sleep. The most we as parents can do is to make the environment helpful to sleep.4.

It’s time that you decided what your own feelings are about bedtime and analyzed your feelings and needs, and your child’s feelings and needs. 5. The most important guideline is that you decide what you are going to do, and then stick with it. Parents usually create their own problems by dancing around and between all the different bedtime methods until they get themselves angry and their kids confused. So, the first step is to decide exactly how you will handle bedtime. The second step is to communicate your rules to your child. The third step is to carry out the plan.

A. Being in bed is too lonely, too boring, and no fun at all!

B. I’m going to give you three ideas for solutions

C. In kids’ opinion, sleep plays an important role in childhood.

D. There’s a big difference between the two.

E. Sleep will then come on its own.

F. Can you give me some examples to deal with kids’ problem?

G. But to kids, sleep is purely and simply an unwanted interruption in a life full of fun.

 

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Crown shyness(树冠羞避) is a mysterious natural phenomenon in which the crowns of some tree species do not touch each other, but get separated by a gap clearly visible from ground level. The effect usually occurs between trees of the same species, but has also been observed between trees of different species.

There are many theories going around, most of which make sense, but no one has been able to prove without the shadow of a doubt why some trees avoid touching each other.

In his 1955 book Growth Habits of the Eucalypts, Australian forester M.R. Jacobs writes that the growing tips of the trees are sensitive to abrasion(擦伤), which results in crown shyness phenomenon. This theory was also supported by Dr. Miguel Franco. Some experiments have shown that if trees displaying crown shyness are artificially prevented from swinging in the wind and touching each other, they gradually fill up the gaps between them.

But while the above theory is arguably the most widespread, it’s certainly not the only one. Some scientists have suggested that crown shyness is a mechanism to stop the spreading of leaf-eating insects. These pests have been known to work together and create structures that extend up to 10 cm off of tree branches in order to reach other plants, so the gaps are the trees’ natural defense method.

One Malaysian scholar studied many trees, but found no traces of abrasions, despite their clear crown shyness. Instead, he suggests that the growing tips of the trees were sensitive to light levels and stopped growing when they got too close to other trees. Plants are able to sense how close they are to other plants and in order to get more light, they give off some chemical element to stop other trees from growing too close.

Whatever the reason, one thing is for sure: plants are more intelligent than people used to think.

1.What can we know about crown shyness?

A. It can cause abrasion between trees.

B. It only happens between the same species.

C. It has been discovered for only half a century.

D. No agreement has been reached about its real cause.

2.What will happen if trees showing crown shyness are stopped from swinging?

A. The trees will stop growing and even die.

B. The gaps between the trees will grow wider.

C. The crown shyness phenomenon will disappear.

D. The gaps between the trees will remain the same.

3.What’s tree’s reaction when attacked by pests according to the text?

A. Swinging less in the wind

B. Leaving space between their crowns

C. Spreading their branches and leaves

D. Stopping growing for a period of time

4.Which statement might the Malaysian scholar agree with?

A. Trees have special ways to attack others.

B. Some insects stop trees growing too close.

C. Trees compete with their neighbors for light.

D. Trees won’t touch each other to avoid diseases.

 

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Social media is one of the fastest-growing industries in today’s world. Your friends’ lives may look more exciting than yours on Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram, but a new research shows it is because they are faking(伪造) it.

A recent survey has found around two-thirds of people on social media post images to their personal information to make their lives seem more adventurous. And more than three quarters of those asked said they judged their peers based on what they saw on their Instagrm, Snapehat or Facebook pages.

The British survey, by smart phone maker HTC, found that, in order to make our own pages and lives appear more exciting, six percent also said they had borrowed items to include in the images in order to pass them off as their own. More than half of those surveyed said they posted images of items and places purely to show off, causing jealousy among friends and family.

Behavioral psychologist Hemmings said the trend was unsurprising due to the rise of social media. “We’re living in a world instant communication.” she said. “Fashion and style used to live and die in magazines; now people are in search of authentic, peer-to-peer recommendations as well, making social media an equal power house to magazines and newspaper.”

“With images being shared in an instant, we desire to know what our friends are wearing, or what super stars are buying, as soon as they have got them.” Such is the influence of social media sites like Instagram, 76 percent of those asked also said seeing items on social influences them to buy them, with men more likely to take style advice and buy what they see.

1.How do some people make their lives appear more exciting?

A. By buying pictures.    B. By posting images.

C. By making up stories.    D. By risking their lives.

2.What does the underlined word “jealousy” in Paragraph 3 mean?

A. Adventure.    B. Conflict

C. Envy    D. Misunderstanding

3.What can we learn from Hemmings?

A. The trend reflects the development of social media.

B. Fashion and style no longer exist in magazines.

C. Magazines and newspapers are less important.

D. The trend is beyond people’s expectation.

4.Which of the following best describes social media like Instagram?

A. Positive    B. Creative

C. Persuasive    D. Honest

 

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