假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to get from your letter and knew you’re coming to China.
Among the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are high recommended (推荐). Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, longest river and one of the mother river of Chinese civilization. You can learn a tot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river are amazing, with many well-know sightseeing spots. That’s because I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
I hope your suggestion will be of some help and you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
A violent earthquake struck Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region on Monday 24 February, 2003, 1.killed as many as 240 people and injured 600,2.(leave) tens of thousands of more homeless.
Luckily, the earthquake happened in the daytime after people had already left home3.work or school. Many people4.( save )because they were outside. Fortunately, all the school children were taking part in 5. ceremony in the street and many adults were working in the fields when it struck.
“My family had just finished breakfast when the house started shaking and we heard a loud noise. I 6.(immediate) pushed my grandchildren out of the door to safety before the house fell down.” said a local woman. Sadly, her neighbors were 7.(little) lucky: both parents died while their three children were seriously injured.
Fortunately, rescue workers 8. (arrive) very quickly. By Tuesday most of the injured had received medical care or had gone to hospital, and by Wednesday thousands of tens, camp beds and warm quilts had arrived and all the9.(survivor) had somewhere to sleep. The next step was10.( bring ) drinking water supply and electricity back to normal as soon as possible.
One morning, I was on my way back home and was very ______ and hungry after working a 12-hour night shift (夜班). I ______ at a local restaurant to have breakfast. It was really a truck stop and I was the only ______. Right after I placed my ______, I saw a man come in. He was carrying a small backpack. He ______ in his pocket and pulled out some ____. He asked the waitress if 38 cents was ______ to buy a cup of coffee. She looked at his ____ and said, “______. Have a seat.” (Coffee was 50 cents a cup at the time.) It really ____ me how she had tried to protect his ______ from being hurt and how he had not asked for any help.
Shortly before my ______ came, I asked the waitress to come over. I said, “You know, I am not feeling ______. I don’t think I am going to be able to eat my breakfast. Do you think there is anyone here who might ______ it?” She first asked if I was OK and then she ______. She said, “I think so. Are you sure?” I told her that I was sure.
She then walked over to the gentleman and told him that I had ordered food and it was too _____to stop the order but I didn’t feel like eating. Would he be so________as to take it so that they wouldn’t have to _____it away? I walked to the cash register (收银台) and was _____for the meal. At the cash register, I asked if they had gift cards. They did. I________one for $25.00 and asked them to give it to the gentleman after I left.
Going out of the restaurant, I felt so proud of myself with all my tiredness gone. Helping people in need sometimes makes a difference to others and at the same time to ourselves.
1.A. pleased B. tired C. upset D. anxious
2.A. looked B. stood C. waited D. stopped
3.A. customer B. passenger C. tourist D. walker
4.A. backpack B. book C. order D. plate
5.A. got B. reached C. taken D. arrived
6.A. map B. ticket C. change D. paper
7.A. enough B. short C. good D. able
8.A. map B. hand C. backpack D. friend
9.A. Not really B. Never mind C. With pleasure D. Of course
10.A. comforted B. interested C. touched D. disappointed
11.A. pride B. right C. body D. word
12.A. menu B. food C. coffee D. bill
13.A. happy B. bad C. well D. satisfied
14.A. eat B. prepare C. pay D. share
15.A. accepted B. refused C. left D. understood
16.A. early B. late C. slow D. quick
17.A. sorry B. eager C. kind D. free
18.A. throw B. take C. pick D. bring
19.A. charging B. changing C. waiting D. paying
20.A. made B. bought C. became D. ordered
Renting an apartment
Finding the right apartment to rent can have a great effect on your life.1..
Where is the apartment? You might find a nice big apartment, but if you don’t like the neighborhood, you’re probably not going to be happy in your home. Ask yourself, “Is it convenient(方便的) for shops and transportation? Is it safe enough?”
Is having a lot of light important to you? 2.Are they big enough or are they facing south? If an apartment doesn’t have enough light, you may find it to be a terrible place to live.
3. After all, the last thing you want to discover on the moving day is that your bed won’t fit into the bedroom! Also check that there is enough closet(衣橱) space for all of your clothes.
Do you have a car? 4. You should also check the convenience and safety of the parking.
And lastly, be sure to read every word of the rental contract(合同). 5. The apartment you choose will be the place you wake up in and go home to each day. So it’s worth taking the time to carefully consider these things.
A. Do you have a pet?
B. Here are some important things to keep in mind.
C. Is there enough room for your furniture?
D. If there is something you don’t understand, just ask.
E. Then be sure to check the windows in the apartment.
F. If so, you should check to see if there is a parking area.
G. It is a good idea to share an apartment with one of your friends.
The 2016 Olympic Games in Rio may have drawn world-class athletes from around the world, but it was the supermodel Gisele Bundchen that stole the show in an extremely attractive dress in what might have been her biggest catwalk moment to date.
Brazilian supermodel Gisele Bundchen was born in July 20, 1980 in Horizontina, Rio Grande do Sol, Brazil. Originally she wanted to be a professional volleyball player. After being spotted at age 14 in a shopping mall in Sao Paulo, Bundchen moved to New York City to begin her fashion modeling career in 1996 and is now "the most famous face" in the business.
Gisele's first Vogue magazine cover appeared on newsstands in July 1999, and since then, she has become one of the most internationally recognized models. Gisele appeared in more than 7,000 magazine covers around the world. The only woman who made more covers was Princess Diana. Bundchen is said to be the highest paid supermodel of all time, earning a reported $ 33 million in 2007, which has risen by 12 million dollars by 2016.
Although she retired from the runway in 2015 to focus on her family and other projects, Gisele made this--the Opening Ceremony' in her Brazil--her brilliant return, which is for sure the longest runway she has ever walked in her life.
1.The underlined phrase "stole the show" in Paragraph 1 can be replaced by_________.
A. showed herself off B. stole the camera
C. made a hit D. drew less attention
2.What can we learn about Gisele Bundchen from the text?
A. Originally she didn't have the intention to be a model.
B. She made more magazine covers than Princess Diana.
C. She began her fashion modeling career in Sao Paulo.
D. She walked the longest runway in the world.
3.Which of the following may be the best title for the text?
A. A Profitable career B. A Fortunate Brazilian Girl
C. A Money-earning Approach D. A World-famous Supermodel
4.Where does the text probably come from?
A. A finance report. B. A science newspaper.
C. A popular magazine. D. An official document.
When I was a puppy, I entertained you and made you laugh. You called me your child, and I became your best friend. Whenever I was “bad” , you’d shake your finger at me and ask “How could you?” My house-training took a little longer than expected, but we worked on that together. We went for long walks and runs in the park, car rides, and stopped for ice cream.
Gradually, you began spending more time at work and on your career, and more time searching for a human mate. She, now your wife, was not a “dog person”, but I was happy because you were happy. When the human babies came along, I shared your excitement and I wanted to mother them, too. Yet I spent most of my time being driven to another room. Fortunately, as they began to grow, I became their friend.
Then you had a better job in another city, and the new apartment didn’t allow pets. You made the right decision to send me to an animal shelter for your “family”. I was excited about the car ride until we arrived there. It smelled of dogs and cats, of fear, of hopelessness. At the gate, your son screamed in tears and you had to loosen his fingers from my collar.
Sometimes when I heard human footsteps, I thought it was you. It never was. Finally, the day came. As I felt the cool liquid coursing through my body, I lay down sleepily, looked into the staff’s kind eyes and murmured “How could you?”
Perhaps because she understood my dogspeak, she said “I’m so sorry.” And with my last bit of energy, I tried to tell her that my “How could you?” was not directed at her. It was you, My Beloved Master. I will think of you and wait for you forever.
1.What is Paragraph 1 mainly about?
A. A lovely puppy.
B. The patient puppy owner.
C. Precious memories of the puppy.
D. A big challenge of puppy training.
2.Why did the dog spend time being driven to another room?
A. It liked to do things alone.
B. It got no space in the room.
C. It didn’t like the babies at first.
D. It wasn’t popular with the family.
3.Why did the son scream in tears at the gate of the animal shelter?
A. He didn’t want to leave the dog behind.
B. The shelter wasn’t good enough.
C. He was afraid of the dogs.
D. His father went away.
4.What can be the best title for this passage?
A. How Could You?
B. My Beloved Master
C. The Death of a Dog
D. What is the Power of Loyalty?
