Question

假定你是新华髙中髙一 • 2班班长李华，你校正在推选各班“班级之星”。请你向校刊英文版写一封信，介绍你班张婷的事迹，并推荐她入选你班“班级之星”。

内容包括：

1. 关心同学和班集体；

2. 积极组织、参与班级活动；

3. 学习成绩突出，乐于助人；

4. 全班在张婷的带动下，班风良好；

5. 你认为张婷应该获得这项荣誉。

注意：1. 词数100左右；文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Editor,

I am honored to recommend my classmate Zhang Ting to be awarded the title of “Class Star” of my class.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Editor,

I am honored to recommend my classmate Zhang Ting to be awarded the title of “Class star” of my class.

Zhang Ting is warm-hearted and cares a lot about the whole class. And she always takes an active part in class activities. In the singing contest, English speech, basketball matches and other sports events, you can find Zhang either participates actively or cheer aloud for her classmates. What’s more, she is also ranked top in academic study and often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has successfully inspired the whole class and now we are studying in a harmonious atmosphere under her influence. So I think she deserves this honor and we all should learn from her.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封推荐信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封推荐信；假定你是新华髙中髙一 • 2班班长李华，你校正在推选各班“班级之星”，请你向校刊英文版写一封信，介绍你班张婷的事迹，并推荐她入选你班“班级之星”。人称应为第三人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：warm-hearted（热心的），cares a lot about the whole class（关心集体），take an active part in class activities（积极参加班级活动），be ranked top in academic study（成绩突出），devote one’s spare time to helping others（乐于助人）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。