Question

短文改错

Last Thursday we go to Mianshan Mountain for our autumn outing.We got the foot of the mountain at 9 am. Following the long path,they began to climb.After some time,we were all tiring.We had a very shortly rest and moved on.At last,we succeeded in getting to the top,on which we kept laughing and jump.It was seemed that we were the happiest people in the world.We took some photo there,and then sat down but had something to eat.At 3 pm, we began to go down.It was a interesting and unforgettable day and all of us wished the autumn of our country would be with us forever.

Answer

1.go→went.

2.got后加to.

3.they→we.

4.tiring→tired.

5.shortly→short.

6.jump→jumping.

7.去掉was.

8. photo→ photos.

9.but→and.

10.a→an.

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲了上周四，我们去爬绵山，度过了愉快而又难忘的一天。

第一处：考查时态。根据时间状语Last Thursday可知是发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，故go→went。

第二处：考查固定短语。句意：我们上午九点到达山脚下。句中get是不及物动词，不能直接接宾语，此处加宾语要加介词，get to“到达”，该短语是固定短语，故got后加to。

第三处：考查代词。本文的主人公是We，指我们去爬山。故they→we。

第四处：考查形容词。tiring“累人的，无聊的”，常修饰物；tired“疲倦的，厌烦的”常修饰人。此处修饰we要用tired，故tiring→tired.

第五处：考查形容词。shortly是副词“立即，不久”，此处修饰名词rest，用形容词，指短暂的休息，故shortly→short。

第六处：考查固定短语。句意：最后，我们成功地到达了山顶，在上面我们一直笑着跳着。keep doing“一直做某事”，与and前的laughing并列也用-ing形式，故jump→jumping。

第七处：考查动词。seem是行为动词，此处不表被动，不和系动词连用，故去掉was。

第八处：考查名词。photo是可数名词，此处由some修饰，用复数形式，指一些照片，故photo→ photos。

第九处：考查连词。句意：我们照了一些照片，然后坐下来吃东西。前后动作是并列关系，不是转折，故but →and。

第十处：考查冠词。day是可数名词单数，此处泛指有趣难忘的一天，interesting的首字母发音是元音，所以用不定冠词an，故a →an。