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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

Being a good listener can not only help someone solve much of life’s problems but also improve one’s way of dealing with matters.There was a time when a misunderstanding occurs between my friend and me,and we quarreled terrible at that time.For the sake of our friendship,I took great trouble to make an explanation to her.But as result,the more I explained,the more angrier he seemed.Therefore I was very disappointing.One day,quarrel with him again,I suddenly realized that I should be a listener so that he could tell me how was in his mind.And it did work! The misunderstanding between us was removed and we became friend again.

 

much →many occurs →occurred terrible →terribly her →him as后面加上a 去掉more disappointing →disappointed quarrel →quarreling/quarrelling how →what friend →friends 【解析】 本文为记叙文。作者讲述了自己和好朋友吵架之后,发现做一个好的倾听者不仅可以帮助一个人解决生活中的许多问题,而且还可以改善一个人处理问题的方式。 第一处:考查代词。much指代不可数名词,many指代可数名词,根据of life's problems可知,此处指代的是“生活中的许多问题”。故much 改为many。 第二处:考查时态。根据语境可知,此处描述的过去的事情,应使用一般过去时。故occurs 改为occurred。 第三处:考查副词。此处修饰动词quarreled,应使用副词形式。故terrible 改为terribly。 第四处:考查代词。根据下文可知,作者的朋友是个男生。故her 改为him。 第五处:考查冠词。固定短语:as a result“结果”。句意:但结果是,我解释得越多,他似乎就越生气。故as后面加上a。 第六处:考查比较级。angrier“更愤怒”,本身已经是比较级,more明显多余。故去掉more。 第七处:考查形容词。disappointing“令人失望的”,disappointed“(感到)失望的”。句意:所以,我非常失望。故disappointing 改为disappointed。 第八处:考查非谓语动词。quarrel与主语I之间是逻辑主谓关系,应使用现在分词做状语。故quarrel 改为quarreling/quarrelling。 第九处:考查连词。句意:有一天,我又和他吵架了,我突然意识到我应该做一个倾听者,这样他才能告诉我他在想什么。此处为宾语从句,连词在从句中做主语,意为“他在想什么”。how“如何”,what“什么”。故how 改为what。 第十处:考查名词复数。句意:我再次成为朋友。根据句意可知,此处应使用名词复数。故friend 改为friends。
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