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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently, one of my friends have sent me a short message, say that true friends are one soul in two bodies, which moves me very much and makes me think how true friendship is.

Nowadays, the word friendship has been used very often that it has lost its meaning. Some jokingly put it that friends are made to be taken advantage. In my opinion, true friendship doesn’t mean that you need your friends help, you’ll treat them to dinner. True friendship is the communication of the hearts and understand of the souls. True friends keep you in the mind, no matter where they are. Once you have found such true friends, do treasure him. With friendship, life proves happily and harmonious.

 

have→has say→saying how→what very→so advantage后面加上of that→when friends→friend’s understand→understanding him→them happily→happy 【解析】 本文为议论文。真正的友谊是心灵的交流和心灵的理解。真正的朋友无论在哪里,都会把你记在心里。一旦你找到了这样真正的朋友,一定要珍惜他。有了友谊,生活变得幸福和谐。 第一处:考查主谓一致。句意:最近,我的一个朋友给我发了一条短信。此处主语是one,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式。故have改为has。 第二处:考查非谓语动词。句意:说真正的朋友是两个人的灵魂。此处与massage是逻辑主谓关系,应使用现在分词,表主动。故say改为saying。 第三处:考查名词性从句。句意:这让我很感动,让我思考什么是真正的友谊。此处做think的宾语从句,从句中缺少表语“什么”,应使用连接代词what引导。故how改为what。 第四处:考查固定结构。句意:现在,“友谊”这个词用得太频繁了,已经失去了它的意义。固定结构:so…that…“如此……以至于……”。故very改为so。 第五处:考查固定结构。句意:有些人开玩笑说,朋友是用来被利用的。固定短语:take advantage of“利用”。故advantage后面加上of 第六处:考查连词。句意:在我看来,真正的友谊并不意味着当你需要朋友的帮助时,你会请他们吃饭。when“当……的时候”。故that改为when。 第七处:考查名词所有格。此处指“你朋友的帮助”。故friends改为friend’s。 第八处:考查动名词。句意:真正的友谊是心灵的交流和心灵的理解。根据句意及句子成分分析可知,此处应为名词“理解”。故understand改为understanding。 第九处:考查代词。句意:一旦你找到了这样真正的朋友,一定要珍惜他们。此处指代such true friends,应使用复数形式。故him改为them。 第十处:考查形容词。句意:有了友谊,生活变得幸福和谐。prove可做系动词,此处与harmonious并列,应使用形容词。故happily改为happy。  
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