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Absolutely, when I started touring in the 2015, bike-share was just happening in a few cities, and I questioned how it was just a trend. But since then it has grew sharply, and by now it’s national news. Major cities are starting to welcome bicycling, and major political leader are starting to see the bicycle only as a tool, but also as something that people are really crazy about. There’s a kind of energy comes from the bicycle movement, and politicians are really attracted to that. But also, it’s the positive benefits which bicycling brings to the community, the money-saving benefits, the business benefits, or the job benefits. The case for bicycling is definite becoming a lot clearer, as more people are doing it and as we have many case studies.
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French Women Don’t Get Fat
In 2004, a different kind of French revolution 1.(hit) American bookstores, 2. the publication of Mireille Guiliano’s book French Women Don’t Get Fat. Did I read it to try to get some unique insight into how French women maintain their thin 3.(figure)? Guilty!
This book introduces eating small portions of foods, enjoying each bite, eating three meals a day, and—this is 4. is typically French to me—sitting in a good posture while eating. Guiliano offers a simple leek soup that helps French women when they find 5.(they) a kilo or two up on the balance. What’s problematic to me is that for the first two days, Guiliano recommends 6.(eat) the leek soup only, to clear out the system. When I read this, I thought, “Yes, but what would I eat?”
When 7. comes to diets, what it really comes down to is not just the food but acceptance of one’s body. When she was younger, the famous 8.Italy) actress Sophia Loren 9.know) for her beautiful and curvy body. Did she go on 10. diet? No. She just came from Italy. She was quoted once as saying, “Everything you see, I owed to pasta.” To me, those are the words of a woman who doesn’t need a diet.
Holbrook girl marks 10th birthday with chemotherapy port shirt giveaway
All Sophia Espiritu wanted for her 10th birthday was to help children who, like her, are undergoing treatment at Stony Brook Cancer Center.
Sophia, of Holbrook, has Langerhans Cell Histiocytosis(朗格汉斯细胞组织细胞增多症), a ______ form of cancer believed to ______ one in 200,000 children, according to the Histiocytosis Association. After receiving her ______ chemotherapy(化疗) treatment on Wednesday, Dec. 5, her birthday, Sophia, a ______ Four student at Tamarac Elementary School in Holtsville, ______ chemotherapy port shirts purchased with nearly $13,000 she raised in November with the help of her school.
Since Sophia began receiving treatment in March, she has ______ the ComfyChemo port shirt, with ______ zippers（拉锁） that allow easy access to the installed mediport in her chest. “It’s ______ and it takes less time and less effort for ______ and putting your shirt back on,” Sophia says.
Sophia noticed that ______ of the other children receiving treatment wore a shirt like hers. So she decided to start a fundraiser to raise money to ______ shirts for them.
She made a nearly three-minute video in ______ she spoke of her condition and discussed the ______ of her fundraiser, which is now over. The video, which ______donations of $18 to purchase a shirt, was ______ on social media.
In about three weeks, Sophia raised $12,812, which ______ more than 700 shirts.
Sophia wore her shirt when she arrived Wednesday at Stony Brook ______ chemotherapy treatment.
Mother Melody Espiritu, a physical therapist, says Sophia’s tumor（肿瘤） has shrunk by 93 percent and that she will be ______ with monthly chemotherapy treatment in June. “She is an ______ to all of us for her bravery, her strong faith and her ______,” she says.
1.A. rare B. serious C. unique D. deadly
2.A. help B. affect C. choose D. injure
3.A. daily B. yearly C. weekly D. monthly
4.A. Class B. Number C. Grade D. Year
5.A. went through B. made into C. contributed to D. handed out
6.A. donated B. washed C. worn D. removed
7.A. front B. side C. back D. top
8.A. popular B. comfortable C. casual D. expensive
9.A. changing B. sewing C. opening D. selling
10.A. each B. half C. some D. none
11.A. purchase B. design C. create D. produce
12.A. whose B. what C. that D. which
13.A. method B. process C. result D. goal
14.A. charged B. requested C. resisted D. ordered
15.A. abandoned B. joked C. shared D. commented
16.A. pays B. buys C. covers D. affords
17.A. for B. with C. under D. over
18.A. finished B. equipped C. satisfied D. connected
19.A. individual B. adult C. inspiration D. success
20.A. imagination B. selflessness C. curiosity D. mercy
Music has always been my hobby. 1. It helped me in every perspective when I wanted to relax, when I wanted to get motivated to practice harder. I felt that I really love music, and I was just telling myself at that point this is something that I want to do forever.2. They were really shocked when they first heard me saying about this audition(试镜). They didn’t know what JYP is. They didn’t know anything about K-pop. I was in a position where every parent would let their sons or daughters to be in good education and good at sports.
So after making this decision, everyone was just telling me like, “Why are you so stupid? Why are you so dumb to make this decision? You have a bright future right in front of you.3. It’s a high risk that you’re going to fail. You’re going to fail, Jackson.” I came from having everything to having nothing. I just thought to myself like I knew what I wanted and I got it all planned out in my mind. Other people around me telling me stuff are my good friends, but at the end of the day, 4.
I just believed in what I believed in and just carried on doing my own stuff because I believed in it. I just want to ask if you are happy. I mean like, are you happy because of your salary? Or are you happy because of the job that you are doing? If you think you’re doing something that you love, then go on, this is your dream. Always be hungry in what you want to do. 5.
A. they are not responsible for my life.
B. Luckily my parents always stand by my side.
C. Why are you trying to risk yourself?
D. My parents thought I was crazy.
E. Take risk, work hard and have no regrets.
F. It gave me motivation to everything.
G. they won’t think about things from my perspective.
Famous Irish poet Oscar Wilde(1854-1900) once wrote: “Ah! Realize your youth while you have it.” He pointed out the important truth about how precious youth is in one’s journey through life.
However, the popular internet slang word foxi or “Buddhist” is challenging this norm by encouraging young people to remain calm and peaceful and avoid conflict as much as possible.
The phrase was reportedly created in Japan in 2014 to describe young men who no longer bother to start relationships with women or follow someone else’s life path. They prefer to stay in their own peaceful world without being disturbed and care little about passion and success.
Now, Chinese internet users are pairing the phrase with other words to describe a similar mindset. For example, “Buddhist students” are those who study just the right amount—they don’t cut class, but they don’t burn the midnight oil, either. There are also “Buddhist parents”, who interfere little with their children’s lives and let them develop however they like—the opposite of “helicopter parents”.
In this fast-changing and competitive world, it’s only natural that people are seeking a spiritual anchor(支柱).
However, some would compare foxi with “demotivation culture”—a phrase that describes young people who feel aimless and powerless. They say that foxi actually reflects the reality that young people are losing their will to fight. They are pretending to keep a healthy and wise attitude toward failure simply because they’re incapable of succeeding.
But no matter what, there is one thing that “Buddhist youngsters” should keep in mind: You may want to keep a calm mindset regarding failure, but you should also be passionate and positive about school, work and life.
After all, Wilde also wrote: “Live the wonderful life that is in you! Let nothing be lost upon you. Be always searching for new excitements. Be afraid of nothing.
1.The author begins with the poet Oscar’s words to ______.
A. bring in the main topic
B. stress the importance of youth
C. advise readers to enjoy youth
D. introduce a famous poet to readers
2.What may be the behavior of “helicopter parents”?
A. They give few suggestions to their children.
B. They interfere their children’s life as they like.
C. They hope their children can do what they are into.
D. They don’t push their children to burn the midnight oil.
3.Why does the author refer to “demotivation culture” in the sixth paragraph?
A. He simply wants to compare it with Buddhist.
B. He likes foxi better than demotivation culture.
C. He wishes young people to know more about it.
D. He indicates the negative effect of foxi on young people.
4.What advice does the author give to “Buddhist youngsters”?
A. They should confront life positively.
B. They should be a true Buddhist person.
C. They should keep calm in face of failure.
D. They should be full of passion about everything.
The Arctic Circle—the habitat of polar bears and decreasing sea ice at the top of the world—hit 32 degrees Celsius, last week.
This was the temperature in Banak, Norway on July 30, though some Norwegian areas even reached a couple degrees warmer, according to the European meteorology site severe-weather.eu. Banak sits atop northern Europe, over 350 miles above the bottom edge of the Arctic Circle.
The greater Northern Hemisphere and Europe itself have been repeatedly scorched by both record and near-record temperatures this summer, a consequence of overall rising global temperatures.
In the past 40 years, Earth’s climate has experienced an accelerated warming trend, which adds an extra level of background warming to hot spells—making heatwaves more extreme, climate scientists have said.
A photo of what appears to be Scandinavian folks taking a dip in a river while reindeer—the cold-adapted herbivores(食草动物)—cooled off in the water beside them is perhaps the best example of just how hot it is in parts of the Arctic Circle right now.
The “warm season” in Banak is short, lasting around three months, but the very warmest day of the year, around July 23, is usually around 62 degrees Fahrenheit(华氏度)—about 30 degrees cooler than temperatures there now. Overall, temperatures in northern Europe are between 14 to 21 degrees Fahrenheit, 8 to 13 degrees Celsius, above average.
All-time temperature records were set in both Norway and Finland on July 30, including 86 degrees Fahrenheit, 30 degrees Celsius, in Verde, near Banak, though extreme or near-record temperatures blanketed the region.
Persistent heat and dryness this summer have transformed normally green European countries into brown and yellow lands, and the continent’s extreme heat is expected to persist.
Andrew Derocher, a professor at the University of Alberta who studies polar bears, said climate change is shrinking the ice bears usually hunt on, making them faced with the danger of extinction.
1.What does the underlined word “scorched” in the third paragraph probably mean?
A. burned B. achieved
C. scored D. reached
2.What does the photo show according to the author?
A. Scandinavian folks like to swim in a river.
B. Reindeer have adapted to the cold climate.
C. The ice there has totally been melted into water.
D. The temperature of the Arctic Circle now is high.
3.What can you learn from Professor Derocher’s words?
A. Maybe bears will die out in the near future.
B. Climate change is threatening polar bears.
C. He is worried about the shrinking of the sea ice.
D. He advises people to do something to improve the condition.
4.Where may you find this article?
A. In a fashion magazine. B. In a news report.
C. In a geography textbook. D. In a travel handbook.
