Question

假定你是高三(3)班学生李华，就学校食堂的卫生情况想给校长 Mr. Smith 写一封信，反映以 下问题:

1.  食物不加盖;

2. 品种单一;

3.  服务态度差。

注意:1.词数 80 左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Smith，

I‟m Li Hua, a student from Class 3 Grade 12.

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Thank you for taking the time to consider my requests.

Answer

Dear Mary,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Cl ass 3 Grad e 12. I’m writing to complain about the poor food quality and the service in the cafeteria.

The food is not covered with flies hovering over it, which can lead to diseases. My friends who ate in the cafeteria had diarrhea yesterday. Besides, we would appreciate a litter more variety in the menu choices. We understand it’s hard but it’s not very appetizing to have hotdogs three days in a row. What’s worse, the cafeteria staff are rude to us when we make selections.

We believe these complaints can be fixed if you will take action. Thank you for taking the time to consider my requests.

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：假定你是高三(3)班学生李华，就学校食堂的卫生情况想给校长 Mr. Smith 写一封信，反映以 下问题:1. 食物不加盖；2. 品种单一；3. 服务态度差。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：a student from Cl ass 3 Grad e 12（一个来自12年级3班的学生）；complain about the poor food quality（抱怨这可怜的食物质量）；lead to diseases（导致疾病）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。