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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

When I was young, my mother work at a hospital far away from my home. In the morning, she got up early than anyone else in my family to prepare breakfast for us, and then sent me and my brother to school. This went on for 18 year. She was never complained about it. No matter how tiring she was, she always had enough energy to be my mom. However, during holiday seasons, she had to work, that damaged my spirit because she was most important person to me. Last Christmas Eve, I went to the hospital to visit him. Seeing her devotion to care for the patients, I began to understand her job but feel proud of her.

 

1. 改 work 为 worked 2. 改 early 为 earlier 3. 改 year 为 years 4. 把 was 删除 5. 改 tiring 为 tired 6. that 改为 which 7. 在 was 后添加 the 8. 改 him 为 her 9. 改 care 为 caring 10. 改 but 为 and 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了妈妈一直为家庭操劳,而且非常敬业,我不理解妈妈为何在假期还要工作,但当我看到她对照顾病人的奉献精神时,我开始理解她的工作,并为她感到骄傲。 第一处:考查时态。句意:在我小时候,妈妈在离家很远的一家医院工作。这是我小时候的事情,应该用一般过去时,故work 改为worked。 第二处:考查比较级。句意:妈妈比家里任何人都要起得早,为我们准备早餐。根据than判断此处要用比较级,故early 改为 earlier。 第三处:考查名词。句意:这种情况一直持续了18年。18修饰可数名词复数 ,故year 改为 years。 第四处:考查语态。句意:她从来没有抱怨过。She 与complained之间是主动关系,不用被动语态,故删除was。 第五处:考查形容词。句意:不管她有多累,她总是有足够的精力做我的妈妈。ing结尾的形容修饰物,表示“令人……的”,ed结尾的形容词修饰人,表示“感到……的”,故tiring改 为 tired。 第六处:考查非限定性定语从句。句意:然而,在假期,她不得不工作,这伤害了我的心灵,因为她是我最重要的人。此处为非限定性定语从句,关系词指代前面的事情,在从句中作主语,故that 改为 which。 第七处:考查定冠词。句意参考上题解析,最高级most important前用定冠词修饰,故was 后加 the。 第八处:考查代词。句意:去年圣诞节前夜,我去医院看她。我去医院看的人是妈妈,应该用 her,故him改为 her。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。句意:看到她对照顾病人的奉献精神,我开始理解她的工作,并为她感到骄傲。devotion 后的 to 为介词,需要接动名词作宾语,故care 改为 caring。 第十处:考查连词。句意参考上题解析,此处表示并列而非转折关系,故but改为 and。  
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A. Two western countries have taken its photos.

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C. China is the first country to land a spaceship there.

D. It exists because the sun never shines there.

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A. To study the geography of the lunar dark side.

B. To grow potatoes on the moon.

C. To examine the growth of eggs and seeds.

D. To survey the lunar biosphere.

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C. The ascent stage.    D. The capsule.

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A. Cautious.    B. Disapproving.

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