Question

假定你是李华， 正在你校做交换生的英国好友Bruce 发邮件说他打算参加你校“Chinese Art”兴趣小组，有两门课程可以选择:剪纸(paper-cutting) 和京剧 (Beijing Opera)，希望你能给些建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括:

1. 你建议的课程；

2. 你的理由；

3. 你的祝福。

注意:1.短文词数不少于100。    2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

Dear Bruce,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Glad to hear you want to join the interest group of Chinese Art. I’d like to give you some advice.

Of the two subjects covered, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer Beijing Opera, one of the most popular Chinese traditional arts. In recent years, more and more foreigners have begun to learn about Beijing Opera, through which they can learn much about Chinese history. Moreover, the costumes and the facial makeup will amaze you. Besides, I like Beijing Opera and I have taken part in many competitions, making it possible for me to help you. That’s why I think Beijing Opera would be a better choice.

Hope you’ll fall in love with Beijing Opera.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Bruce,

Glad to hear you want to join the interest group of Chinese Art. I’d like to give you some advice.

Personally, I prefer paper-cutting, one of China’s folk arts with a long history. By the Song Dynasty, it had become an important part of everyday life. You can learn much about Chinese culture on history by learning paper-cutting. Moreover, you can improve your taste in art and your drawing ability. Besides, my grandma is a good at paper-cutting and she would be willing to help teach you. That’s why I think paper-cutting would be a better choice.

Hope you’ll fall in love with paper-cutting

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一篇电子邮件：假定你是李华， 正在你校做交换生的英国好友Bruce 发邮件说他打算参加你校“Chinese Art”兴趣小组，有两门课程可以选择:剪纸(paper-cutting) 和京剧 (Beijing Opera)，希望你能给些建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括:1. 你建议的课程；2. 你的理由；3. 你的祝福。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：join the interest group of Chinese Art（加入中国艺术兴趣小组）；Beijing Opera（京剧）；by learning paper-cutting（通过学习剪纸）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。