Question

假定你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(scribble)和乱丢垃圾(litter)的行为，请用英文给学生会主席Bruce写封信。

1. 说明写信的目的。2. 对这些行为提出批评。3.提出建议。

注意:1.短文词数不少于100。2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

Dear Bruce,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Bruce，

I am Li Hua, a student from class one, senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students : littering and scribbling.

It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of teachers and students,our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.

Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用文写作，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(scribble)和乱丢垃圾(litter)的行为，请用英文给学生会主席Bruce写封信。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：draw one’s attention吸引某人的注意力，improper behavior不当行为，image形象，ashamed惭愧的，appropriate适当的，set up建立，specific rules具体规定，At the same time同时，behave表现。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。