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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第l1处起)不计分。

We live in the countryside. Most of which we see is beauty and nature. One of the exceptions to the beauty is the litter some people throw out their windows as they are driving on the roads. One of the few drawbacks to living in the countryside is that public service, such as litter collection, are little available than they are closer to the city.

A helping habit that my family practise regularly are picking up litter in our surrounding area. We have become so accustomed to do this that my little brother will often say, “There's some litter, Daddy, stop the car!” And we would often pull over and pick it up. It may seem strange, and we actually enjoy it. We pick up litter in parks, on sidewalks, practically anywhere. Once I even saw a complete stranger picking up litter close to where we live in. He smiled at me and said, “I saw you doing it, and it seemed like the good idea.”

 

第一处: which改成what 第二处: out之后加of 第三处: service改成 services 第四处: little改成less 第五处: are改成is 第六处: do改成doing 第七处: would改成will 第八处: and改成but 第九处: 去掉in 第十处: the改成a 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文中主要讲了作者一家人在开车出行时,经常把车停在路边,捡拾乡村中垃圾的故事。 第一处:考查语义理解。句意:我们看到的大多是美丽和自然。most of what 做see的宾语,所以which改成what。 第二处:考查固定短语。句意:这种美有一个例外,那就是有些人在路上开车时把垃圾扔出窗外。throw out of抛出,该短语是固定短语,所以out之后加of。 第三处:考查名词单复数。句意:生活在农村的一个缺点是,公共服务,如垃圾收集,比城市更少。文中表示“公共服务”是复数意义,所以service改成 services。 第四处:考查比较级。根据than,可知这里在进行比较,用比较级,所以little改成less。 第五处:考查主谓一致。主语A helping habit是单数,谓语动词用单数,所以are改成is。 第六处:考查固定用法。句意:我们已经习惯了这样做,我的小弟弟会经常说,“有一些垃圾,爸爸,停车!” become accustomed to doing习惯于做某事,该用法是固定用法,所以do改成doing。 第七处:考查时态。句意:我们经常把车停在路边,把它捡起来。表示“将来发生的事情”,用一般将来时,所以would改成will。 第八处:考查连词。这看起来很奇怪,但我们真的很享受。文中表示转折关系,所以and改成but。 第九处:考查宾语从句。where we live作介词to之后的宾语,是一个宾语从句,引导词在从句中作状语,in多余,所以去掉in。 第十处:考查冠词。句意:他笑着对我说:“我看到你这么做了,这似乎是一个好主意。”文中表示“一个好主意”,是泛指,good的首字母发音是辅音,所以the改成a。  
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