Question

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词． 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity. Others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.

Answer

1. begin→begun

2.wait→waiting

3. and→or

4. take前加to

5.myself→my/the

6.去掉that

7. larger→large

8.include→includes

9. mistake→mistakes

10. Immediate→Immediately

【解析】

本文为记叙文。作者描述了自己在上写作课时发生的小故事。

第一处：考查时态。此处描述的过去的事情，应使用一般过去时。故begin改为begun。

第二处：考查现在分词。此处与主语everyone是逻辑主谓关系，应使用现在分词，表主动、进行。故wait改为waiting。

第三处：考查连词。句意：每个人都沉默了，等着看谁会被要求大声朗读他或她的段落。or“或者”。故and改为or。

第四处：考查不定式。固定搭配：be confident/ eager to do“自信/渴望做某事”。故take前加to。

第五处：考查限定词。根据语境，此处应指“我的作业”或特指“作业”，应使用形容词性物主代词或定冠词。故myself改为my/the。

第六处：考查固定搭配。固定搭配：be afraid to do“害怕做某事”，that明显多余。故去掉that。

第七处：考查形容词。此处泛指“一大群人”，没有比较的意思，应使用形容词原级。故larger改为large。

第八处：考查主谓一致。此处为定语从句，先行词是learning，关系词that在从句中做主语，谓语动词include应使用第三人称单数形式。故include改为includes。

第九处：考查名词复数。mistake是可数名词，其前没有不定冠词，应使用复数形式。故mistake改为mistakes。

第十处：考查副词。此处修饰后面整句话的内容，应使用副词形式。故Immediate改为Immediately。