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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last year, a girl got herself stick in the sewer (下水道) and almost lost his life. Thanks the police, she was rescued in time. This accident were caused by the girl's carelessness while walking. She fixed so much attention on her mobile phone that she didn't notice the sewer in the front of her was without a cover.

It sounds kind of ridiculous, but it's truly and common in our daily life. Mobile life has distracted (分散) people's attentions from face-to-face communication. It seems what they can't live without a mobile phone. Whether waiting for the bus or meet with friends, they will make sure that their mobile phone is at hand.

Don't let mobile phones control your life, and you may lose yourself someday.

 

1. ... got herself stick ... stick → stuck 2. ...lost his life... his→ her 3. ...Thanks the police ... Thanks 后加 to 4. ...were caused by were → was 5. ... in the front of her 去掉the 6. ... it’s truly ... truly→ true 7. ... people’s attentions ... attentions → attention 8.... It seems what ... what → that 9. ... or meet with friends meet → meeting 10. ... and you may... and→ or 【解析】 文章大意:一个女孩看手机差点儿失去生命,由此作者呼吁我们不要让手机控制了我们的生活。 第一处:非谓语动词用法错误。宾语herself与宾补stick之间位被动关系,故用过去分词作宾语补足语。句意:去年,一个女孩困在下水道里。故将stick改为stuck。 第二处:代词用法错误。句中主语为a girl,故对应的代词用her。句意:差点儿失去市民。故将his改为her。 第三处:短语用法错误。根据上下文及句意可知,这里应该用thanks to多亏了。句意:多亏了警察,她及时被救。故在thanks后加to。 第四处:主谓一致用法错误。句中主语his accident为单数,故谓语动词也要用单数形式。句意:这次事故是由于女孩走路时的粗心大意造成的。故将were改为was。 第五处:短语用法错误。根据上下文及句意可知,这里表达的是“前面”而非“前部”,故用in front of。句意:她没有注意到她面前的下水道没有盖子。故将the去掉。 第六处:词性用法错误。根据前面的be动词is和后面的并列形容词common可知,这里应该用形容词形式。句意:但这在我们的日常生活中是真实和普遍的。故将truly改为true。 第七处:名词数用法错误。名词attention为不可数名词。句意:移动生活分散了人们对面对面交流的注意力。故将attentions改为attention。 第八处:名词性从句关系词用法错误。根据句中从句为陈述句,故用关系词that。句意:似乎没有手机他们就无法生存。故将what改为that。 第九处:非谓语动词用法错误。根据前面的waiting河后面的逻辑主语可知,这里用现在分词作状语。句意:不管是等公共汽车还是和朋友见面。故将meet改为meeting。 第十处:连词用法错误。根据上下文及语境可知,这里用or,表示“否则”。句意:不要让手机控制你的生活,否则你总有一天会失去自我。故将and改为or。  
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An expert said, “Parents today want their kids to spend more time 3. things that can bring them money and honour. They have stopped 4.(do) the one thing that has proven to bring success. That is doing household chores.”

Another study finds that compared with the kids 5. didn't do household chores, young adults beginning chores at ages 3 and 4 were more likely 6.(succeed). They had better family relationships, did better in school, performed better at work and were more independent.

Personal happiness 7.(say) to come from strong relationships. It begins by learning to be kind and 8.(help) to their parents at home.

If your kids say they have to skip chores because it's time they 9.(deal) with their homework, you’d better not let them off the hook. If you do, your child may think grades are more important than caring about others. “What may seem like small 10.(message) at the moment add up to big ones over time,” says an expert.

 

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We all admit that modern technology has taken over our lives, for good of course. Being young people, we are________at the development of technology. But there is a group of people who cannot_________with new technology---- our parents.

They are the people who are caught up between_________and modern society. They are not exactly old or refuse to change.________, they are trying very hard to become modernized, ending up being_________in the middle. They range in age from 40 to 60 and have the latest_________.

They are almost like the_________five years ago, always on their cellphone with a mindless_________. And I saw something today that made me extremely_________.

It was a heartbreaking_________. On the train, a mother was playing a game with her daughter sitting beside her. The little girl, about five years old, was_________to her mother---this was_________a desperate attempt to get her mother’s attention.

The  mother? All she did was nod, with her eyes fixed on the________________. I saw the girl make  a(n)____________attempt to at least get her mom to look at her, and _________, then she sighed and resigned defeat, falling_________. It broke my heart, and got me wondering—what  kind of game can make  the mother ignore her daughter?

This is just a common example. I’ve seen too many during my public commute(通勤)and I know that this is a very depressing sight. The scene was so_________to what we saw years ago, when parents_________their children because they were_________focusing all their attention on their cellphone. I don’t know_________to laugh or cry. But all I can do now is hope that this storm passes.

1.A. excited    B. surprised    C. weak    D. frightened

2.A. look up    B. build up    C. keep up    D. speed up

3.A. wealthy    B. traditional    C. common    D. developing

4.A. As a result    B. In addition    C. By the way    D. On the contrary

5.A. locked    B. stuck    C. surrounded    D. lost

6.A. computer    B. television    C. car    D. cellphone

7.A. teachers    B. parents    C. teenagers    D. students

8.A. question    B. answer    C. subject    D. game

9.A. sad    B. moved    C. embarrassed    D. puzzled

10.A. accident    B. chance    C. scene    D. message

11.A. talking    B. crying    C. laughing    D. explaining

12.A. interestingly    B. fortunately    C. obviously    D. amazingly

13.A. window    B. screen    C. magazine    D. key

14.A. final    B. easy    C. quick    D. strange

15.A. in time    B. in vain    C. in need    D. in case

16.A. calm    B. nervous    C. patient    D. silent

17.A. similar    B. touching    C. normal    D. challenging

18.A. protected    B. criticized    C. envied    D. missed

19.A. seldom    B. never    C. sometimes    D. always

20.A. what    B. when    C. whether    D. where

 

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How to Fix a Relationship

If you're having a problem with your relationship, you're not alone 1. However, you can make it work out if you decide to work together to fix it.

Recognize the problems. Any number of problems could do harm to your relationship. You should look for signs and symptoms of the problems you're facing. Listening attentively is the key, which can help you understand what he or she is feeling. 2. Actually think about what the person is saying, and maybe try to understand what is behind the words, as well. You also have a right to discuss what you’re feeling and thinking. The key is to keep a calm head. 3. Once you’ve figured out what your problems are together, have a conversation to find ways to solve them. How can you solve the problems in a way that both of you can live with? 4. Start with the place you both agree on. Maybe you can both agree on the problem at least, or maybe you can agree on the first step to the solution. For instance, maybe you agree that you are feeling disconnected. Maybe you can take it one step further and agree that you need to spend more time together.

Make a plan together. Once you’ve agreed to solutions, it’s time to put them into concrete terms. For instance, if you both agree you need to spend more time together, then maybe the agreement will be that you should make a date at least once a week.

Find ways to compromise. The key to any relationship is learning to compromise. 5.Compromising is about finding common ground, and both of you giving in a little on the issue.

A. Spend time connecting.

B. Talk about solutions together.

C. Don’t just let the words pass over you.

D. In other words, you need to look for common ground.

E. Most people have trouble with relationships at one point or another.

F. You can’t just expect to win every argument, as relationships need to give and take.

G. Whatever you need to do, take a few minutes to calm down before continuing the discussion.

 

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For example , some might say, "I just won a hundred dollars on the lottery (彩票) . It was great. I took that dollar ticket back to the store and turned it in for one hundred dollars! "

This guy's a winner , right?  Maybe , maybe not. We then discover that he bought  $200 worth of tickets, and only one was a winner. He's really a big loser!

He didn't say anything that was false, but he left out important information on purpose. That's called a half-truth. Half-truths are not technically lies, but they are just as dishonest.

Some politicians often use this trick. Let's say that during Governor Smith's last term,her state lost one million jobs and gained three million jobs. Then she seeks another term. One of her opponents (对手) says, " During Govemor Smith's term, the state lost one million jobs ! " That's true. However, an honest statement would  have been , " During Govemor Smith's term , the state had a <u>net gain </u>of two million jobs. "

Advertisers(广告商) will sometimes use half-truths. It's against the law to make false statements so they try to mislead you with the truth. An advertisement might say, " Nine out of ten doctors advised their patients to take Yucky Pills to cure toothache. " It fails to mention that they only asked ten doctors and nine of them work for the Yucky Company.

This kind of deception happens too often. lt's a sad fact of life :Lies are lies , and sometimes the truth can lie as well.

1.How much did the lottery winner lose?

A. One hundred dollars.    B. Two hundred dollars.

C. Three hundred dollars.    D. Four hundred dollars.

2.We may infer that the author believes people should___________.

A. buy lottery tickets    B. not take anything at face value

C. make use of half-truths    D. not trust the Yucky Company

3.What do the underlined words “net gain” in Paragraph 5 mean?

A. Total saving.    B. Big advantage.

C. Large share.    D. Final increase.

4.What can we know from the example of the Yucky Pill advertisement?

A. False statements are easy to see through.

B. Advertisements are based on facts.

C. Half-truths are often used to mislead people.

D. Doctors like to act in advertisement.

 

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As Katie Paterson, the creator of the Future Library, puts it: “Future Library is an artwork for future generations.” These projects, more than a century in the making, are part of a new wave of “slow art” intended to push viewers and participants to think beyond their own lifetimes. They aim to challenge today’s short-term thinking and the brief attention spans of modern consumers, forcing people into considering works more deliberately. In their way, too, they are fighting against modern culture – not just regarding money, but also the way in which artistic worth is measured by attention.

In a similar fashion, every April on Slow Art Day, visitors are encouraged to stare at five works of art for 10 minutes at a time – a tough task for the average museum visitor, who typically spends less than 30 seconds on each piece of art.

Like the Future Library, the century cameras are very much a project for cities, since it’s in cities that time runs fastest and the pace of life is fastest. “Since I started living in a city, I’ve somehow been quite disconnected,” Anne Beate Hovind, the Future Library project manager, who described how working on the library drew her back to the pace of life she knew when she was growing up on a farm in her youth, told The Atlantic magazine.

1.According to the first paragraph, what will NOT happen in 2114?

A. The Future Library will be open to the public for the first time.

B. A camera which was produced 100 years ago will be exhibited.

C. Photos with a 100-year exposure time will be developed and exhibited.

D. Books printed on the wood of trees planted in 2014 will be displayed.

2.What can we learn about today’s people’s attitude toward works of art?

A. They spend little time on works.

B. They consider works deliberately.

C. They spend much money on works.

D. They stare at works for 10 minutes at a time.

3.What is the purpose of  the wave of slow art?

A. To advocate creating works of art slowly.

B. To encourage people to consider works more deliberately.

C. To protect works of art from being damaged.

D. To promote works of art for modern culture.

4.How would Anne Beate Hovind feel about the city life?

A. It’s busy.

B. It’s awful.

C. It’s developed.

D. It’s discouraging.

 

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