Question

请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Last fall, after a day of perfect weather, my brother and I decided to build a stick shelter and sleep outside. But it was a little of more challenging than we original thought. The biggest problem was finding sticks---they are either too wet nor too short. So we used our tent poles. An hour late, it was finished. They looked great on the outside and quite comfortable on the inside. Just when we were ready for a comfortable night of sleep, it started to rain. But we were preparing. We brought our rain jackets, that kept us dry and allowed us to fall sleep comfortably. It didn’t turn out perfect, but we had great time in our shelter.

Answer

去掉 little 后的 of

original → originally

are → were

nor → or

late → later

They → It

preparing → prepared

that → which

sleep → asleep

great 前加 a

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者和作者的哥哥在野外宿营的美好经历。

第一处：考查固定用法。a little of后接名词，a little修饰形容词，所以去掉 little 后的 of。

第二处：考查副词。修饰动词thought，用副词，所以original → originally。

第三处：考查时态。由时间状语Last fall，可判断出是发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以填are → were。

第四处：考查固定用法。句意：它们要么太湿，要么太短。either… or要么…要么…，该用法是固定用法，所以nor → or。

第五处：考查常见用法。句意：一小时后，它被完成。“一小时后”应该说An hour later，所以late → later。

第六处：考查代词。指代上文的a stick shelter，用it，所以They → It。

第七处：考查形容词。句意：但是，我们已经准备好了。we were prepared是我们准备好了，而we were preparing.是我们正在准备，所以preparing → prepared。

第八处：考查非限制性定语从句。这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，先行词是our rain jackets，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，所以that → which。

第九处：考查固定短语。句意：我们带了雨衣，它使我们保持干燥，让我们舒适地入睡。fall asleep入睡，该短语是固定短语，所以sleep → asleep。

第十处：考查固定用法。虽然结果并不完美，但我们在庇护所度过了一段美好的时光。have a great time玩得高兴；过得愉快,该用法是固定用法，所以great 前加 a。