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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I worked as a health nurse in a very poor city in Florida. I was often very kindly to my patients, especially the old people. One Christmas Day as I were cooking Christmas dinner to my family, I thought of some old people there. They were my patients which were always alone at home. So I decide to make more and deliver hot meals to them. When I saw my two sons play in the house happily, but I made them stop. And I asked them help me pack and deliver these meals. As we took the food into our poor houses, they were very moving and we saw tears of joy in their eyes.

 

1. kindly- kind 2.were-was 3.to-for 4.which -who /that 5.decide- decided 6.play- playing 7. but去掉 8.help前加 to 9.our –their 10.moving -moved 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了一个圣诞节,我正在为家人做圣诞晚餐,忽然,我想到了一些贫穷的老人。于是,我多做了一些饭,让我的儿子们帮忙送到了他们那里。那些老人非常感动,我们看到他们眼中充满了喜悦的泪水。 第一处:考查形容词。句意:我经常对我的病人很好,尤其是老人。作was后的表语,用形容词,所以kindly- kind。 第二处:考查主谓一致。句意:一个圣诞节,我正在为家人做圣诞晚餐,我想到了那里的一些老人。主语I是单数,谓语动词用单数,所以were-was。 第三处:考查介词。句意:一个圣诞节,我正在为家人做圣诞晚餐,我想到了那里的一些老人。文中表示“为…”,用介词for,所以to-for。 第四处:考查定语从句。这里含有一个定语从句,my patients是先行词,关系词在从句中作主语,指人,所以which -who /that。 第五处:考查时态。文中都在描述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以decide- decided。 第六处:考查常用句型。句意:当我看到我的两个儿子正在房子里玩得很开心时,我让他们停下来。see sb. doing看到某人正在做某事,该句型是固定句型,所以play- playing。 第七处:考查时间状语从句。句意:当我看到我的两个儿子正在房子里玩得很开心时,我让他们停下来。这里含有一个时间状语从句,but多余,所以去掉but。 第八处:考查固定句型。句意:我请他们帮我打包和送餐。ask sb. to do sth.让某人做某事,该句型是固定句型,所以help前加 to。 第九处:考查代词。句意:当我们把食物送到他们的贫穷的房子里时,他们非常感动,我们看到他们眼中充满了喜悦的泪水。文中表示“他们的贫穷的房子”,所以our –their。 第十处:考查形容词。句意:当我们把食物送到他们的贫穷的房子里时,他们非常感动,我们看到他们眼中充满了喜悦的泪水。v+ing修饰物,v+ed修饰人,这里修饰人,所以moving -moved。  
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