Question

假如你是高二年级的李明, 你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试, 都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信,向学校英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点:

焦虑症状: 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等。

建议: 调整心态 准备充分。

1.考前制定好合适的复习计划。

2.考试期间正常作息。

3.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠等其他建议。

注意:

1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇，使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。

3.词数100个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇 头晕-dizzy(adj.)  食欲-appetite (n.)

Dear editor,

I’m Li Ming of Senior Two. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

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Yours,

Li Ming

Answer

Dear editor,

I am Li Ming of Senior Two. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy and tired; some can’t sleep well and lose their appetite. In fact, much of this anxiety can be overcome by good preparation and a positive attitude.

First of all, in my opinion, having a right attitude towards exams is vital. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so we shouldn’t take the exams too seriously. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam in which ways we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, it’s unnecessary to stay up too late. A warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed might help us have a sound sleep. Surely,We may as well go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before an exam so that we can relax ourselves and then concentrate on exams.

Hopefully, my advice will be of great help to us student.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假如你是高二年级的李明, 你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试, 都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信,向学校英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括：焦虑症状: 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等。建议: 调整心态 准备充分。1.考前制定好合适的复习计划。2.考试期间正常作息。3.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠等其他建议。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：dizzy（头晕），appetite（食欲），symptom（症状），anxiety（焦虑），nervous（紧张的），preparation（准备），positive（积极的），attitude（态度），overcome（克服）及energetic（精力充沛的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。