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Good afternoon，my dear friends! Today the number of the netizens in our country have increased rapidly，yet much of them do not pay enough attention to the family. There's no doubt that we are benefit much from the Internet. For example； it’s convenient of us to get the information we need and communicate with our friend and relatives. Meanwhile, it can help us learn that is happening both at home and abroad. However，no matter how attractively the Internet is，we shouldn’t separated from our loved ones. Therefore，just for a moment, we should stop surfing the Internet and spending time with our families，enjoying the time when we were together. So just remember this ： don’t let the keyboard separate you from your loved ones.
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Longjing tea，also known as West Lake Dragon Well tea，is named 1. its production region—Longjing Village of West Lake in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province.
West Lake Dragon Well tea has topped list of 2. ten most famous teas in China. The superior geographical environment and good quality water resources around West Lake have contributed much to the growth of Longjing tea.
Legend has it that Emperor Qianlong 3. (visit) Lion Peak Moutain during his Hangzhou travels, and he saw several 4. (lady) picking the tea at the foot of the mountain. He was so interested in it that he decided to have a try himself.
5. picking the tea，he received the news of his mother s illness, so he 6. (careless) put the leaves in his right sleeve and left Hangzhou for Beijing. He visited his mother immediately upon his 7. (arrive) in Beijing, and Empress Dowager smelt the fragrance of the leaves in his sleeve and wanted to have a taste. Emperor Qianlong ordered some tea for Empress Dowager，and she found 8. (she) completely refreshed after 9. (drink) a cup of tea，and she even praised it as a treatment for all ills. From then on，Shi Feng Longjing tea 10. (list) as the tribute tea (贡茶）especially for Empress Dowager.
I have a home away from home — my school，Hamden High. Sometimes after 13 hours of school and sports, I consider _______ there overnight， sleeping in the band room. But I feel most at home at Room Cl03，the costume shop，which my acting friends and I call home. The couch there has been a second _______ for me.
I have been on the costume crew for four years. I _______ my first play set in Italy in the 1960s. With the help of my costume teacher，I _______ my first costume successfully. On stage，it sparkled and made the _______ of the queen come to life. I felt _______, realizing that I’d do this forever and help create _______ through cloth and color.
My costume teacher _______ my abilities to select designs，colors and fabrics that will _______ each character. So she asks me to take charge of the ensemble (全套戏服）. ________ a hard task，I welcome it! I ________ the long nights spent cutting the patterns. I feel like an older sister to the younger ________.Through my four years of theater, I have ________ my theater family and the young actors treat me as their older sister. I would feel ________ each time a family member leaves and we will cry.
I will leave my Hamden High theater family and make my new ________ at UCONN，a school where I can ________ these feelings again. I look forward to learning new ________ in something I truly love and wish to ________ for the rest of my life. In UCONN, I will also help the actors on stage to ________ as if their characters come to life. ________,I will find a comfortable couch in a new band room to sleep on.
1.A. staying B. checking C. decorating D. escaping
2.A. desk B. bed C. world D. furniture
3.A. encourage B. accept C. fail D. remember
4.A. saved B. wore C. created D. afforded
5.A. character B. custom C. dream D. power
6.A. nervous B. curious C. proud D. shy
7.A. lives B. chances C. gifts D. characters
8.A. gives away B. believes in C. holds back D. takes off
9.A. fit B. test C. choose D. change
10.A. If B. Until C. Though D. Unless
11.A. fear B. love C. ignore D. count
12.A. directors B. audiences C. actors D. teachers
13.A. built B. visited C. phoned D. left
14.A. calm B. upset C. excited D. satisfied
15.A. promise B. theater C. home D. research
16.A. correct B. remove C. forget D. experience
17.A. requests B. skills C. uses D. opinions
18.A. do B. collect C. receive D. compare
19.A. attempt B. look C. choose D. agree
20.A. Thus B. However C. Luckily D. Hopefully
The Silk Road was a historical network of trade routes that connected China and the Mediterranean Sea，allowing cultural and economic interaction between the East and the West. Begun in the 2nd Century B C” the Silk Road carried goods，ideas, and even illness for thousands of miles between great civilizations for more than a thousand years. 1. It was the creation of Germany’s Ferdinand von Richthofen, who traveled to China several times in the second half of the 19th Century.
China’s powerful Han Dynasty began expanding its trade routes towards the West in the years around 100 B.C. 2. Some shipments made it through to Europe and to northern and eastern Africa, through the port of Alexandria.
As its name suggests, the Silk Road was home to large amount of silk, which made its way from China to the Mediterranean and，to Rome. It wasn’t only silk，however, that was carried along the Silk Road 3. Chinese traders brought delicate porcelain plates and thin but durable paper money. Romans brought delicately carved pottery (陶器）and jewelry to China.
4. Merchants carried shipments from major center, and then others carried the foods farther on the route. Many merchants traveled in groups, called carvans (商队). Many carvans and individual merchants traveled with bodyguards because theft along the routes was not uncommon.
Several cities along the Silk Road became major trading centers. Some of the more famous of these were Alexandria，Karakorum, Antioch，Constantinople, and Persepolis. Local taxes placed on goods traveling along the route were quite common. 5.
A. The name，however，is a modem idea.
B. Diseases also spread along the Silk Road.
C. It sent silk and other goods to other civilizations.
D. Merchants would prepare some supplies in advance.
E. Goods did not travel with the same person all along the route.
F. As a result, many goods traveled only part of the way due to the high cost
G. Many other things made their way from the East to the West, or from the West to the East.
Craft (手工艺）is becoming a heritage industry — but a record of disappearing skills might just come in handy in the future.
Mr. Lobb (of John Lobb the bootmaker) mentioned that custom clothing and shoe-making were once the norm for everyone. How come，then，today a pair of normal Lobbs would set you back over £2,000? The price has obviously gone up because of lack of competition and higher wages，but would custom clothing once again be affordable to all if the demand was there? Do we just wave goodbye to these skills，or should we fight to maintain them?
The disposable (一次性的）culture we “enjoy” today has existed in our life for almost two generations now. We like our products to be made by either a robot or invisible，cheap hands so that we can accumulate them cheaply and frequently. The concept of “craft” is something that’s now largely considered to be strange，and seems to be limited to museums and dusty, independent shops. Hobby crafts such as knitting do undergo revivals (复兴）from time to time，but I think that’s because they are seen as short-lived fashionable leisure pursuits rather than a craft worthy of revivals on a commercially feasible (可行的）scale.
To drive a revival in any of these crafts, you would probably need to apply the same marketing techniques that are used to sell any other items today. The consumer must believe that they just have to have it. If they don't have it now, it will either go up in price or go out of fashion --- both reasons enough in themselves for a shopper to act.
But does it finally matter if these skills will no longer serve any practicable use in the decades to come? I don’t know the answer to that，but I have long thought it would be a good idea if we “banked” these skills somehow，just as we are not attempting to do with seeds. You just never know whether we’ll need them in the future. Maybe it’s time to establish a worldwide network of volunteers to record，through the written words and videos，as many of these dying skills as possible. Actually, a rough look on YouTube fills me with hope that an army of willing volunteers is probably out there already and just needs someone or something to gather them together.
1.According to the text，the custom clothing is dying in that_
A. it serves no useful purpose
B. it doesn’t meet people’s demand any more
C. it is too costly for most people to afford
D. it has long been lack of competition all along
2.What does the author really want to express about the occasional revival of hobby crafts?
A. It is a sign of disposable culture.
B. It indicates the direction of fashion.
C. It can’t help revive the traditional crafts.
D. It creates no commercial value in the long run.
3.Which of the following measures may take effect in reviving crafts?
A. Making them as affordable as possible for the foreigners.
B. Adopting modem marketing strategies used to sell other items.
C. Establishing a network of volunteers to sell them worldwide.
D. Drawing people’s attention to the videos of these crafts.
4.From the last paragraph，we know the author_.
A. shows great interest in craft
B. doesn’t want craft to disappear
C. feels sad about the disappearance of craft
D. tries to explain the reason for craft’s disappearance
Fireworks are exciting, but also hard to control. The Chinese artist Cai Guoqiang，though, has developed a way to harness the visual and physical power of fireworks to make art He recently used them to create a burning sculpture that stretched high into the sky. Guoqiang fittingly named the work Sky Ladder.
Guoqiang built Sky Ladder by making a frame out of metal. He coated the frame with gunpowder，the main chemical material in fireworks.
The artist tried one end of the frame to the ground and attached a large weather balloon to the other end. The balloon was filled with helium 一 a gas that is lighter than air. When released，the balloon floated upward, pulling the top of the ladder 500 meters into the sky. That’s higher than the top of the Empire State Building.
Guoqiang set fire to the bottom of the ladder，and the crackling（啪啪作响） flames raced skyward up the frame. The sculpture burned for two-and-a-half minutes before its flames began to die out from the bottom up.
Dealing with explosive (炸药）is challenging, and conditions had to be perfect for Guoqiang to achieve his desired effect. He first attempted Sky Ladder in 1994，but bad weather prevented him from successfully completing the work. Guoqiang put Sky Ladder aside so that he could work on other projects, perhaps most famously the fireworks display that opened the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
Finally，after two more failed attempts，Guoqiang successfully sent his flaming ladder skyward last year. He presented Sky Ladder in his hometown, a quiet fishing village near Huiyu Island, Quanzhou. He offered the work as a gift to his 100-year-old grandmother，other family members，his friends and his town.
“Behind Sky Ladder lies a clear childhood dream of mine，"Guoqiang explains. “Despite all life’s twists and turns, I have always been determined to realize it. The ladder rose toward the morning sun, carrying hope. For me, this not only means a return, but also the start of a new journey."
1.Which of the following can replace the underlined word “harness” in Paragraph 1 ?
A. control and use B. find and collect
C. save and develop D. count and produce.
2.What can we learn about the work Sky Ladder Cai Guoqiang built last year?
A. It proved to be a failure.
B. It could fly free in the sky.
C. It kept burning for 2.5 minutes.
D. It was sent skyward in the evening.
3.When did Cai Guoqiang first imagine a ladder of fire?
A. When he was a young boy.
B. When he saw the Empire State Building.
C. When the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games opened.
D. When his grandmother had her 100th birthday. ，
4.What may be the best title for the text?
A. Living with hope B. A birthday gift
C. Burning man D. Art on fire
