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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

This morning my American friends Jack and I went to the temple fair holding in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at that we saw. There were such many different performances and booths selling tradition handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to play, food to eat, and performances to see, we spend at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and another dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion dances, waist drum dancing and other folk performances. We came back of home at about seven p.m., tired and happy.

 

【解析】 本文为记叙文。本文讲述作者和朋友一起去逛城市庙会的经历。 1.考查名词的数。句意:今天早晨,我和我的美国朋友杰克去了我们城市举行的庙会。根据内容可知,本句中的朋友是杰克,是一个朋友,所以friend要用单数。因此friends改为friend。 2.考查非谓语。句意:我和杰克去了我们城市举行的庙会。分析句子可知,the temple fair 与动词举行hold二者是被动关系,庙会是被举行,因此要用过去分词作定语,而不是现在分词,因此holding改为held。 3.考查关系词。句意:当我们到达公园时,我们对看到的景象感到惊奇。分析句子we were amazed at that we saw.可知,宾语从句中的动词saw 缺少宾语,宾语从句中缺少宾语要用what,而that在宾语从句中不做任何成分,只起引导词的作用。因此that改为what。 4.考查固定搭配。句意:有如此多的不同的表演和出售传统手工艺品的展台。英语中如果名词前有many/much时,要用so修改,所以句中的such many different performances and booths中的such 要换成so, 因此such改为so。 5.考查形容词。句意:有那么多的出售传统手工艺品的小摊。名词handicrafts要用形容词修饰,而 tradition是名词,因此 tradition改为traditional。 6.考查谓语动词的时态。句意:我们在人群中穿行花了至少六个小时。根据时间状语This morning可知,本文讲述的是过去的事,因此要用一般过去时,因此spend改为spent。 7.考查固定用法。句意:杰克说他玩得很开心。have a great time为固定搭配,意为“玩得开心”,因此在had后添加a。 8考查语境。句意:因为他不仅品尝了各种当地小吃和其他菜肴,而且还欣赏了现场舞龙舞狮。根据语境可知,是品尝和当地的小吃和其他地方的菜肴。another,意为“又一个,再一个”而other意为“别的,其他的”。因此another改为other。 9.考查固定搭配。句意:我们大约晚上七点回家,很累但很开心。分析句子可知,此处是指回家,即“ come back”,所以of是多余的,因此去掉of。 10.考查转折连词。句意:我们大约晚上七点回家,很累但很开心。根据语境可知,累与开心二者是转折关系,因此and改为but。  
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C. They placed 20 sound recording devices on the mountain.

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