Question

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

It's my honor to give a speech here.After-school activities play a important part in our school li-fe.Proper activities help enrich our lives,broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.

Mine own experience can serve as a case in point.When I was in Senior One,I become a memb-er of our drama club,that I used to visit on weekends.Since my participation in various activities org- anizing by the club,I achieved a lot.

These activities bring me a lot of funs,provide me with good opportunities to develop newfrien- dships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so much advantages sh- own above,why not to join us at once?

Answer

1. a---an

2. or---and

3. Mine---Wy

4. become---became

5. that---which

6. organizing---organized

7. I前添加have

8. funs---fun

9. much---many

10. 去掉to

【解析】

第一处：a→an important的发音开头是元音，故要用不定冠词an。

第二处：or→and 句意：适当的活动有助于丰富我们的生活，拓宽我们的视野，并且可以培养我们的性格。enrich our lives，broaden our horizons和develop our personalities是并列关系，故要将or改为and。

第三处：Mine→My mine是名词性物主代词，相当于＂my+名词＂。该处后面有名词experience，故要将Mine改为My。

第四处：become→became 该句的时间状语为＂When I was in Senior One＂，是过去的时间，故主句要用一般过去时态，故应将become改为became。

第五处：that→which 分析句子结构可知，＂which I used to visit on weekends＂是非限制性定语从句，修饰our drama club，引导词在从句中作visit的宾语，故要用关系代词which引导从句。that不能引导非限制性定语从句。

第六处：organizing→organized＂organized by the club＂是定语从句，修饰various activities，various activities和organize之间是被动关系，故要用过去分词作定语。

第七处：I后加have 该句的时间状语为＂Since my participation in various activities＂，since引出时间状语，主句用现在完成时态，故要在I后加have。

第八处：funs→fun fun是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故要将funs改为fun。

第九处：much→many much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词复数。advantages是复数名词，故要将much改为many。

第十处：去掉to why not do sth.意为＂为什么不做……呢？＂，是固定句式，故to多余，应去掉。