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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第l1处起)不计分。

I’m writing to complain about the quality of the computer which I purchase from your store on January 1, 2019. It unexpected went wrong a few days late. The monitor turned out to be a black screen. I read through accompanying instructions, and tried my best restart the computer several time, but it still failed to work. However, I’m sure there is something wrong for the computer. I am hoping if you can direct me to a store where I may return it for a new replacement within the next three days. Since your store has been gained a good reputation for customer satisfaction, I’m confidence that you will process my complaint at your earliest convenience.

 

【解析】 本文为投诉信。介绍了作者新买的电脑出现的问题并希望商家给予解决。 第一处:考查时态。根据后文on January 1, 2019可知,购买是过去的动作,要用一般过去时purchased。故purchase改成purchased。 第二处:考查副词。此处修饰谓语went,所以要用副词unexpectedly,表示没有想到。故unexpected改成unexpectedly。 第三处:考查副词使用。a few days later几天后,later作时间副词表示“随后,稍后”,late作表示“迟到的,晚的”。故late改为later。 第四处:考查固定搭配。try one’s best to do意为“尽力做某事”,所以restart前要加to。 第五处:考查名词单复数错误。此处表示多次想重启,time表次数是可数名词,由several修饰,要用复数times。故把time改为times。 第六处:考查连接副词。根据语境可知电脑出故障了,而且启动不了,因此作者确定一定是电脑出故障了,前后为因果关系,“因此”用therefore,故把however改为therefore。 第七处:考查固定搭配。there is something wrong with“……出故障”,不用for。故for改为with。 第八处:考查连词错误。此处为hope的宾语从句,根据语境可知,作者希望能告诉自己去一家商店换新的。从句不缺句子成分,不缺意思,所以用that,不用if,that也可以省略。 第九处:考查主被动的错误。句意:因为你的商店在顾客满意方面享有很好的声誉。your store与gain是主动关系,不是被动,所以been去掉。 第十处:考查形容词错误。此处做am的表语,表示有信心,所以用形容词confident,故把confidence改为confident。
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1.A. cooking    B. decorating    C. living    D. resting

2.A. neatly    B. specially    C. quickly    D. temporarily

3.A. Eve    B. morning    C. dinner    D. vacation

4.A. pies    B. mess    C. decorations    D. sight

5.A. violently    B. deliberately    C. excitedly    D. casually

6.A. discover    B. witness    C. describe    D. imagine

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10.A. helped    B. stopped    C. remained    D. counted

11.A. making    B. tasting    C. purchasing    D. delivering

12.A. heavily    B. certainly    C. suddenly    D. frequently

13.A. Mum    B. Santa    C. Christmas    D. guests

14.A. explanation    B. opinion    C. expression    D. reply

15.A. mild    B. curable    C. severe    D. common

16.A. suffering    B. celebrating    C. working    D. decorating

17.A. laundry    B. cleaning    C. operation    D. baking

18.A. still    B. also    C. even    D. just

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TCM will be included in the new version of the International Classification of Diseases (ICD), which will be published by the World Health Organization in 2019, Nature magazine reported. 2. Ryan Abbott at the Center for East-West Medicine at the University of California, Los Angeles, US, said this could benefit TCM.

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Activities like running and weight lifting still extend your life and offer plenty of other health benefits. But for the best possible benefits, O’Keefe says gym-goers may want to consider combining those workouts with activities that foster social connection.

O’Keefe, whose exercise typically includes running and weight lifting, says he’s even changed his own behavior because of the study: he and his family have taken up badminton.

“You can’t play badminton without feeling like a kid again,” he says. “It’s just pure fun.”

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A. Cycling.    B. Badminton.

C. Swimming.    D. Gym exercise.

2.How many people were still living at the end of the research?

A. About 8,500.    B. About 4,500.

C. About 4000.    D. About 2500.

3.What matters most to the result of the research?

A. Family life.    B. Social connections.

C. Frequency of exercise.    D. Wealth and education.

4.What does O’Keefe do after the finding?

A. He puts the theory into practice.

B. He plays badminton just for fun.

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El Yunque is a large national forest on the eastern part of Puerto Rico. Just two of the 56 wild parrots that once lived there survived Maria, the Category-4 storm that struck Puerto Rico in September 2017. Scientists report other forests have seen great drops in parrot populations as well.

In the 1800s, there were more than a million of the bright green parrots living in the wild in Puerto Rico. By the 1970s, the number was down to just 13 birds after years of forest clearing.

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1.Why has the parrot population greatly decreased in the past 200 years?

A. Because of Hurricane Maria.

B. Because of too much hunting.

C. Because of the loss of forests.

D. Because of lack of breeding centers.

2.Which of the following is true about Hurricane Maria?

A. It killed 56 wild parrots at El Yunque.

B. It greatly affected parrots in captivity.

C. It reduced the number of wild parrots.

D. It led to the creation of three breeding centers.

3.What can we infer about Amazon parrots in captivity?

A. They have the highest number in the history.

B. They have been released since Hurricane Maria.

C. They are used to living in the wild.

D. They are larger in number than those in the wild.

4.What is the best title for the text?

A. Scientists Work to Save Puerto Rican Parrots.

B. Amazon Parrots are in Danger of Disappearing.

C. A Special Program Helps Increase the Parrot Population.

D. Hurricane Maria Reduced the Number of Amazon Parrots.

 

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