Question

生活中除了金钱、房子、车子等财富，也有如知识、健康、经历等隐性财富。作为高中生，你所理解的财富是什么？请以“My Treasures”为题用英语写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：

我眼中的财富	至少两点，比如友谊、理想 ……
拥有它们的意义	1. 拥有它们对学习、生活的作用 2. 失去它们对学习、生活的影响
获取它们的途径	（请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法）

注意：

1. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

My Treasures

In our life, we have treasures like money, houses and cars, etc. However, we have a lot more hidden treasures, such as knowledge, health and experiences. As a senior student, I think the most important treasures in our life are

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Answer

My Treasures

In our life, we have treasures like money, houses and cars, etc. However, we have a lot more hidden treasures, such as knowledge, health and experiences. As a senior student, I think the most important treasures in our life are friendship and ideals.

Friendship means a lot to me. I always share sorrows and joys with my friends. Often we offer help each other. Without friends, we would feel lonely and our life would be colorless. Besides friendship, ideals also play an important role in our life. Ideals act as lights in darkness, guiding us forward. Inspired by ideals, we’ll keep moving on. I think a person without ideals is one without hope.

However, how can we win true friendship? In my opinion, we should first learn to communicate. Also, it’s important to be generous and kind to others. Learn to give rather than take. As to ideals, ask ourselves what our strengths and weaknesses are and where our interests lie so as to make it clear what we want to be when we grow up. In this way, we can set up ideals, which we will live up to.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求以“My Treasures”为题用英语写一篇短文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是提纲类作文：生活中除了金钱、房子、车子等财富，也有如知识、健康、经历等隐性财富。作为高中生，你所理解的财富是什么？请以“My Treasures”为题用英语写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：1. 我眼中的财富（至少两点，比如友谊、理想）；2. 拥有它们的意义（对学习、生活的作用和影响）；3. 获取它们的途径（根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法）。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：friendship（友谊），ideal（理想），sorrow（悲伤），joy（快乐），share（分享），colorless（苍白的），darkness（黑暗），communicate（交流），strength（长处），generous（慷慨的）及weakness（短处）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。