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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last weekmy friends invited me to go camp to see the sunriseI felt so excited and asked for my parents’permissionsLuckilyhe agreedWe got to the mountain topthere we would stay for a whole nightAt nightwe made a fireplayed some games and shared a lot storiesWe were singing together while one of my friends were playing the guitarThe next morningwe wake up at about five o’clockWe could not wait to see the sun to come upAfter a whilewe saw the sun risingWhat the amazing scene! The beauty of nature impressed me deep at that moment

 

camp → camping。 permissions → permission。 he → they。 there → where。 在lot后加of。 were → was。 wake → woke。 去掉sun后的to。 the → an。 deep → deeply。 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。本文主要讲述了上周,作者和朋友一起去野营观看日出美景的经历。 第一处:考查短语。go camping去露营。句意:上周,我的朋友邀请我去露营看日出。故将camp改为camping。 第二处:考查名词。名词permission为不可数名词。句意:我感到很激动,请求父母允许。故将permissions改为permission。 第三处:考查代词。指代前面的“我的父母”,是两个人。句意:幸运的是,他们同意了,故将he 改成 they。 第四处:考查定语从句。句中先行词为the mountain top,在非限定性定语从句中作地点状语,故用关系副词where。句意:我们到达山顶,在那里我们将呆整整一个晚上。故将there改成 where。 第五处:考查短语。短语a lot of + 名词。句意:晚上,我们生了一堆火,玩了一些游戏,分享了很多故事。故在lot后加of。 第六处:考查主谓一致。one of + 可数名词复数,表示“……之一”,作主语时谓语动词用单数。句意:我们一起唱歌,而我的一个朋友弹吉他。故将were改为was。 第七处:考查时态。作者在回忆往事,表示发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时。句意:第二天早上,我们大约5点钟醒来。故将wake改为woke。 第八处:考查固定用法。感官动词see + 名词 +动词原形,表示动作的全过程。这里表示太阳升起的全过程。句意:我们迫不及待地看太阳升起。故去掉to。 第九处:考查感叹句。what引导的感叹句为:What + a/an+(形容词)+单数可数名词+主语+谓语! amazing开头是元音音标用an。句意:多美的景色啊! 故将the改成 an。 第十处:考查副词。修饰动词,用副词形式。deep表示具体的深,此处指程度深用deeply.句意:大自然的美深深打动了我。故将deep 改成deeply。  
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13.A. stole    B. changed    C. slipped    D. turned

14.A. other than    B. rather than    C. 1ess than    D. more than

15.A. spot    B. mask    C. smile    D. mark

16.A. struggle    B. task    C. 1esson    D. message

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A. It might frightened away the visitors    B. It was a breakthrough in history

C. It was well received by all the artists    D. It is a masterpiece painted by Christie

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B. The figure wears a strange expression

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A. They invested $432500 to buy paintings

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D. They input a large number of paintings into the computer

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