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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

Women are playing a much important part in society than before. Now women are working as teachers, scientists but even leaders. Almost all jobs that used to be done by men is done perfectly well by women. Women are no longer looked down in society. As the changes in their social role, women's position in the family has been improved as well. That is hard to find the wife is busy while the husband is sitting in an armchair, watches TV. Though there are a lot of changes, the great number of men still guard their rights. Sometimes few women are allowing to attend important meetings. This is the problem we should try to solve it now.

 

much 改为more but改为 and is 改为 are down后加on/upon As 改为 With That与 It watch 改为 watching the 改为 a allowing 改为 allowed it删除 【解析】 本文是一篇说明文,现代社会里女性正起着重要作用,再也没有人瞧不起女性,很多女性都在承担着重要的职位。 第一处:考查比较级。句意:在社会里女性正起着一个比以前更重要的作用。根据句中than和句意可知应该使用比较级形式,所以要把much改为more。 第二处:考查连词。句意:现在女性做老师、科学家甚至还做领导人。根据句意可知上下文是并列关系,而不是转折关系,所以要把but改为and。 第三处:考查主谓一致。句意:几乎所有过去由男性做的工作都被女性做得很好。本句主语是all jobs这是一个复数名词,谓语动词也应该使用复数形式与之对应。所以要把is改为are。 第四处:考查固定搭配。句意:在社会里女性不再被看不起。动词短语look down upon/on瞧不起,看不起;所以要在down后面加on/upon。 第五处:考查介词。句意:随着女性社会地位的变化,女性的家庭地位也已经被提高了。连词as意为“随着”,后面要接句子,介词with表示随着,后面要接短语。本句the changes in their social role是一个短语,要用with,所以要把As改为With. 第六处:考查形式主语。句意:很难发现妻子很忙,而丈夫坐在椅子上看电视的情况。句子it是形式主语,真正的主语是不定式to find….;英语里只有it可以作形式主语,所以要把That改为It。 第七处:考查非谓语动词。句意:很难发现妻子很忙,而丈夫坐在椅子上看电视的情况。句中动词watch与主语the husband构成主动关系,要用现在分词充当伴随状语,所以要把watch改为watching。 第八处:考查固定短语。句意:尽管有很多改变,但是很多男性仍然在捍卫他们的权利。形容词短语a number of意为“许多,大量”,该短语修饰可数名词复数形式,the number of意为“...的数量”与句意不符。所以要把the改为a。 第九处:考查语态。句意:有时候,几乎没有女性被允许参加一些重要的会议。本句主语dew women与动词allow构成被动关系,要用被动语态。所以要把allowing改为allowed。 第十处:考查句子结构。句意:这是我们写作应该努力解决的问题。本句中被省略的关系代词that/which指代先行词the problem充当动词solve的宾语,句中的it是多余的。所以要删除it。  
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