Question

假如你是晨光中学学生李华。因担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，学校关闭了电脑教室的上网功能，同学们感到很郁闷。请你用英语给校长写一封建议信。内容包括:

1.无法上网给学生带来的不便；

2.网络的必要性(帮助解决学习难题、获取最新消息……)

3.发表你的看法。

注意:

1.词数不少于100词；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

参考词汇:不便的；inconvenient

Dear headmaster,

I’m writing to request you to allow us to surf the Internet in the computer classroom.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear headmaster,

I’m writing to request you to allow us to surf the Internet in the computer classroom. Right now, we can’t use the computer in the compute classroom, which makes us very upset because we can’t search for the information we need or read news about what is happening at home or abroad.

As far as I’m concerned, using the Internet is very necessary. Surfing the Internet can benefit us in many ways. First of all, we can search for solutions to some problems that we come across in our studies. Second, it is necessary for us to learn about the latest news. More importantly, we are no longer children now, so we can able to control our behaviour. Therefore, the teachers needn’t be worried about us.

I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration and make a final decision.

【解析】

本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，因担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，学校关闭了电脑教室的上网功能，同学们感到很郁闷。请你用英语给校长写一封建议信。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文是一封建议信，要求考生用英语请给校长写一封建议信，说明无法上网带来的不便等内容。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1. 无法上网给学生带来的不便；2.网络的必要性(帮助解决学习难题、获取最新消息)；3.发表你的看法：学生有自控力。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为surf the Internet、benefit in many ways、search for solutions、come across、control our behavior、take … into consideration等。写作时注意书信的格式和惯用语。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。