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Last summer, I got a young pet dog. I named him with Max after my favorite toy robot. The next day, I called her like this: “Come here, Max!” Then he comes up to me. I told him to getting on the bed. Strange, he went to the bathroom. Although it was very hot, I thought that Max wanted to go for swim, so I put him into a pool. To my surprises, he enjoyed himself very much in the water. Now Max has grown more bigger and follows me no matter where I go. He had brought me a lot of happiness.
I am now on my year abroad in 1. (German) as part of my university course. At the beginning of my time here, I had the chance to meet so many new people and make lots of new friends. It is almost like 2. (start) a new life and can make you feel nervous and 3. (lone) at first. But I knew that when I moved to this country I had to be open and friendly. This is certainly what I have done since moving here and I have made some great friends along the way.
Next week a friend of 4. (I) is moving to Spain for the next part of her year abroad. She will be living near a beach and have a lot of fun. But I am also 5. (concern) about her as she will have to start a new life in another new country. She said that she 6. (want) to go back in time very much.
In order 7. (say) goodbye to her, a group of friends and I had a surprise party. We made her a scrapbook with photos and memories of her time here so 8. she could take it along! We hope that she has 9. wonderful time in Spain and that she will get along well 10. her new classmates and settle into her new home.
Do you know how many languages there are in the world? There are about 1500, but many of them are not considered very _____. English is considered one of most important languages because many people _____ it, not only in England and America, _____ in other countries of the world. About 200 000 000 speak it _____ their own language, and another 230 000 000 use it as _____ language. It is _____ to say how many people are learning it. _____ boys and girls in schools are trying to do so.
Many _____ children study French. French is also a very important language. _____ children study German, Russian, Japanese and Chinese.
Which is the best ______ to learn a language? We know that we all learnt ______ language well when we were ______. If we learn a second language in the ______ way, it may not seem so difficult. What does a small child do? It ______ what people say, and it tries to guess what it hears. When it wants something, it has to ______ it. It is using the language, ______ and talking in it all of the time. If people use a second language ______, they will learn it ______.
In school, you learn to read, to write ,to hear and to ______.It is best to learn all new words through the ______. You can read them, spell them and speak them later.
1.A. spoken B. happy C. important D. ideal
2.A. like B. use C. operate D. play
3.A. but B. and C. too D. so
4.A. like B. with C. for D. as
5.A. distant B. a second C. the second D. a special
6.A. easy B. again C. difficult D. best
7.A. Millions of B. Hundreds of C. Tens of D. Thousands of
8.A. Chinese B. Japanese C. English D. Asian
9.A. Some B. Thousands C. All D. Much
10.A. time B. way C. thing D. place
11.A. a foreign B. our mothers’ C. other’s D. our own
12.A. born B. children C. grown D. boys
13.A. same B. different C. useful D. good
14.A. talks B. wants C. cries D. follows
15.A. ask B. want C. get D. ask for
16.A. speaking B. writing C. thinking D. doing
17.A. sometime B. sometimes C. all the time D. for the time
18.A. fluent B. confident C. freely D. easily
19.A. fight B. sing C. speak D. play
20.A. mouth B. hands C. ears D. eyes
Worry problems are everywhere in our daily life. How to solve them? The answer is that we must equip ourselves to handle different kinds of worries by learning the three basic steps of problem analysis. The three steps are：
Get the facts
Why is it so important to get the facts? Unless you have the facts, you can’t possibly attempt to solve your problem intelligently. Without the facts, all you can do is wondering around in confusion. 1. When you are worried, your emotions are riding high. But here are two ideas that can help you see the facts in a clear and objective way.
When trying to get the facts, you can pretend that you are collecting this information not for yourself but for some other person. This will help you to take a cold and fair view of the evidence. You can also pretend that you are a lawyer preparing to agree.2. You will generally find the truth lies somewhere in between.
Analyze the facts
3. And write out all the various steps you could take and then the probable consequences (后果) of each step. For example, what am I worrying about? What can I do about it? Here is what I’m going to do about it. After carefully weighing all the facts, you can calmly come to a decision.
4.
Unless you take your action, all you face—finding and analysing—is a waste of energy. How can you break the worry habit before it breaks you? Move worry out of your mind by keeping busy.5. Accept what can’t be avoided If you know a situation is beyond your power, say to yourself: “It is so; it can, t be otherwise.” Don’t permit little things to ruin your happiness. Try to develop a mental attitude that will bring you peace and happiness.
A. Act on that decision.
B. It is not an easy job to get facts.
C. Decide how much anxiety a thing may be worth.
D. Plenty of action is one of the best ways to cure worry.
E. There comes a time when you must decide and never look back.
F. Try to get all the facts both on your side and the other side of the case.
G. Whenever you are worried, write down the questions that make you worry.
Micro-blog is no longer simply a platform for self-expression, gossip and networking, as it is becoming an increasingly fierce battlefield for businesses wanting to promote their products and services.
Over the last year, micro-blogging has become wildly popular in China, with some 65 million China based micro-blog accounts registered(注册登记)by the end of 2010 and the number is growing by more than 10 million each month, according to Data Center of the China Internet(DCCI).
At present, China's largest web portal Sina claims to have 5,000 company micro-blog users, including Starbucks, Channel, and IKEA. On the micro-blog pages of the companies, visitors can not only view advertisements, but also see consumer feedback(反馈)and even commentaries on hot social issues.
E-commerce(电子商务)expert Lu Bowang says micro-blogging has opened a whole new dimension of marketing. Through micro-blogs, companies can quickly grasp the attention of potential consumers and interact with them on a regular basis so to develop a friendly link with consumers, Lu said.
An Internet surfer nicknamed Xiaoben posted on his micro-blog page that he enjoyed drinking Puer tea, and within 10 minutes, a micro-blogger who owned an online shop selling Puer tea recommended his shop to Xiaoben. “It is a little bit like magic. I just make a wish, and then I get a micro-blog response.”
However, with more and more people micro-blogging to make money, experts warn that marketing via micro-blog could be a double-edged sword.
Huang Heshui, professor from Xiamen University says micro-blogging is highly personal and private, and that too many advertising messages can annoy micro-blog users leading them to dislike certain brands.
Further, a brand can be as easily damaged as established through micro-blogging, as consumers' negative feedback about a certain product or company can be very quickly spread in the micro-blog community, Huang added.
The micro-blog managers should set up some rules and regulation to supervise micro-blog marketing, and at the same time, business organizations need to strengthen self-discipline(自律)and try to build up an honesty-based business culture, e-commerce expert Lu Bowang suggested.
1.What can we infer from the first two paragraphs?
A. Most people in China plan to use micro-blog.
B. Businessmen use micro-blog to promote their products.
C. Micro-blog used to be a platform for self-expression, gossip and networking.
D. The number of registered accounts will reach 95, 000,000 by the end of March 2011.
2.Names like Starbucks, Channel, and IKEA are mentioned to__________ .
A. show the importance of micro-blog
B. show the development of E-commerce
C. prove that consumers are the most important
D. prove that advertisements are everywhere
3.From the example of Xiaoben, we can know__________ .
A. people don't use their real names when surfing the Internet
B. pure tea is quite precious
C. if one makes a wish on the Internet, he will indeed realize it
D. micro-blog is very convenient in our daily life
4.What can we infer from what Huang Heshui said in the passage?
A. It is not a good idea to advertise products in the micro-blog community
B. Bad comments about a product or a company matter most.
C. The micro-blog has its advantages and disadvantages.
D. Using the micro-blog to set up your brand is much easier.
The medical world is gradually realizing that the quality of the environment in hospitals may play an important role in helping patients to get better.
As part of nationwide effort in Britain to bring art out of the museum and into public places, some of the country’s best artists have been called in to change older hospitals and to soften the hard edges of modern buildings.
Of the 2,500 national health service hospitals in Britain, almost 100 now have very valuable collections of present art in passages (走廊), waiting areas and treatment rooms.
These recent movements first started by one artist, Peter Senior, who set up his studio at a Manchester hospital in northeastern England during the early 1970s. He felt the artist had lost his place in modern society, and that art should be enjoyed by a wider audience. A common hospital waiting room might have as many as 5,000 visitors each week. What a better place to hold regular exhibition of art! Senior held the first exhibition of his own paintings in the outpatients waiting area of the Manchester Royal Hospital in 1975. Believed to be Britain’s first hospital artist, Senior was so much in demand that a team of six young art school graduates soon joined him.
The effect is surprising. Now in the passages and waiting rooms, the visitor experiences a full view of fresh colors, playful images and restful courtyards.
The quality of the environment may reduce the need for expensive drugs when a patient is recovering from illness. A study has shown that patients who had a view onto garden needed half the number of strong painkillers compared with patients who had no view at all or only a brick wall to look at.
1.According to the passage, "to soften the hard edges of modern buildings" means ___________.
A. to pull down hospital buildings
B. to decorate hospitals with art collections
C. to improve the quality of treatment in hospitals
D. to make the corners of hospital buildings round
2.According to Peter Senior, _______.
A. art is losing its audience in modern society
B. art galleries should be changed into hospitals
C. patients should be encouraged to learn painting
D. art should be encouraged in British hospitals
3.After the improvement of the hospital environment, patients may _______.
A. no longer need drugs in their recovery
B. no longer depend wholly on expensive drugs
C. need good-quality drugs in their recovery
D. use more pain killers in their recovery
4.The fact that six young art school graduates joined Peter shows that _____.
A. Peter's enterprise is developing greatly
B. Peter Senior enjoys great popularity
C. they are talented hospital artists
D. the role of hospital environment is being recognized
