Question

假如你是李华，带队去英国友好学校进行了两周的交流学习。请你写一篇发言稿, 在告别仪式上致辞。要点如下:

1. 表示感谢；

2. 总结这次交流活动；

3. 欢迎对方到你校访问。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer

Dear classmates,

It’s a great honor for me to give you a speech. Given the fact that you have helped us a lot, I want to express my heartfelt thanks to you.

As we know, we have a two-week study here, from which we have benefited a lot. We are deeply impressed by your warm welcome and hospitality. It is your hospitality and warm welcome that make us feel at home. Furthermore, exposed to foreign language and culture, we now have a better understanding of British culture and customs. Meanwhile, we have made a lot of new friends, who help us a lot during the study.

How time flies. It’s time to say goodbye. I welcome all of you to our school. Hopefully, we can have a further exchange of thoughts and ideas.

【解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇发言稿。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 表示感谢；2. 总结这次交流活动；3. 欢迎对方到你校访问。

第二，人称以第二人称为主。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表示感谢。第二段，总结这次交流活动。第三段，欢迎对方到你校访问。其中第二段为重点段落。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: heartfelt ，benefited ， hospitality，welcome，language ，culture， custom，further， exchange, be impressed by，be exposed to.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:Given the fact that you have helped us a lot, I want to express my heartfelt thanks to you. As we know, we have a two-week study here, from which we have benefited a lot. It is your hospitality and warm welcome that make us feel at home. we have made a lot of new friends, who help us a lot during the study.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Furthermore, Meanwhile, How time flies, Hopefully.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。