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I am interested at swimming very much. At first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I’ve made lots of friend and we’re very close. It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.

 

at→in health→healthy was→is bored→boring 去掉but my前加of .... much→many friend→friends which→who /that you→me 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。本文主要讲述作者很喜欢游泳。起先,作者去游泳是为了健康,现在是为了能在奥运会上为国家游泳。虽然练习很累,但为了实现梦想,仍然努力练习。由于作者的努力工作,在许多重要的比赛中获得了第一名。在比赛中,作者也结交了许多朋友。 第一处:将第一句话中的at改为in。考查固定词组。be interested in意为"对…感兴趣",是固定搭配。故将at→in。 第二处:将第二句话中的health改为healthy。考查形容词。keep是连系动词,后接形容词作表语。故将health→healthy。 第三处:将第三句话中的was改为is。考查谓语动词时态。根据句中时间状语now,可知谓语动词要用一般现在时态,又因为主语是my dream,为单数,故将was→is。 第四处:将第四句话中的bored改为boring。考查现在分词。boring意为“令人厌烦的”,修饰物,bored意为“无聊的”,修饰人。分析句子可知,Though practicing in the pool is very bored为主系表结构,在主系表结构中,表语主要表示主语的性质和特征,此处主语是practicing,指物,用boring,故将bored→boring。 第五处:将第四句话中的but去掉。考查连词。在英语中,两个分句要用连词连接,在已经有though连接句子的情况下,but是多余的,要去掉,故将but去掉。 第六处:在第五句话中because和my中间加of。考查固定词组。because意为"因为",是连词,连接两个句子构成原因状语从句;because of意为"因为",是介词,接名词或代词。此处work是名词,故在because和my中间加of。 第七处:将第五句话中的much改为many。考查形容词。many修饰可数名词,much修饰不可数名词。competitions是可数名词,要用many修饰,故将much→many。 第八处:将第六句话中的friend改成friends。考查名词复数。friend为可数名词,由前面的lots of可知此处应该用friend的复数,故将friend→friends。 第九处:将第七句话中的which改为who/that。考查定语从句引导词。分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词friends指人,且先行词在从句中作主语,用关系代词who/that,故将which→who/that。 第十处:将第七句话中的you改为me。考查代词。句意:他们也像我一样早起练习。根据句意用代词me。故将you→me。
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2.A. need    B. check    C. break    D. know

3.A. knowledge    B. ability    C. energy    D. money

4.A. situation    B. scenery    C. air    D. sunlight

5.A. shown off    B. made out    C. got through    D. set in

6.A. sound    B. power    C. action    D. result

7.A. carefully    B. gently    C. fast    D. freely

8.A. mistake    B. challenge    C. trouble    D. success

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15.A. first    B. important    C. terrible    D. easy

16.A. stop    B. jump    C. turn    D. improve

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19.A. metal    B. model    C. medal    D. license

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Listen to music. Many people listen to music to calm themselves down. Music actually lifts us out of ourselves. Discover what music works for you. 4..

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A. But what if you are in the city?

B. Notice the animals around you.

C. They are perfect for active calming.

D. Music is a way to express the way that they are feeling.

E. It’s a time to get stressful thoughts out of your head.

F. With enjoyable music even work can be “music to your ears”.

G. You don’t have to find a mountain to sit on, or empty your mind of all thoughts for hours.

 

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Families in poorer US neighborhoods faced a lot of problems, including poor access to healthy food. But even so, regular high quality family mealtimes made a difference to the children’s weight. Dr Fiese said, “Three to four extra minutes per meal will make a healthy weight more possible.”

1.According to the passage, to have a healthy-weight child, parents should ________.

A. limit the food for each meal    B. increase their eating time

C. shorten the mealtime    D. make them eat healthy food

2.How much time is reasonable for one meal according to the passage?

A. About 15 minutes.    B. About 17 minutes.

C. About 20 minutes.    D. About 30 minutes.

3.Why does a longer mealtime make a difference to a normal weight?

A. Because people can have a good rest as they eat meals.

B. Because people can have time to choose what they like.

C. Because people can use mealtimes to do other things.

D. Because people can communicate more in the scheduled time.

4.What does Dr Fiese suggest to us?

A. Parents should not communicate during mealtime.

B. It’s better to add three to four extra minutes to one meal.

C. Four meals a day will make a difference to the children’s weight.

D. Twenty extra minutes per meal make a healthy weight.

 

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In the present century, safety glass was invented for use in modem cars and planes. Safety glass is made by placing a layer of plastic between two layers of plate glass. When the outside layer of glass is broken, the pieces do not scatter (散开) and injure people. Some glass of the type is strong enough to resist bullets (子弹).

Although nowadays plastics have replaced glass under conditions where glass might be easily broken, there are new uses being developed, for the greatest advantage of glass is that its component (组成的) parts are inexpensive and can be found all over the world.

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A. is seen as more than decoration (装饰).

B. is used to make things look pleasant

C. is regarded as transparent (透明的).

D. is widely used to replace steel in making containers

2.Why did Americans make their own glass during the Second World War?

A. They were able to make a new kind of glass.

B. The glass made in Europe was out of date.

C. They refused to use the European glass.

D. The war blocked the way of glass import.

3.Why does the author tell us the legend?

A. To prove the Roman was the first inventor of hard glass.

B. To give some information about hard glass.

C. To support the Americans were as clever as the Romans.

D. To provide a historical event concerned with hard glass.

4.Why are new uses of glass being developed?

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C. Because glass is cheap and easily found.

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