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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It’s easy for you to start smoking. But if you become addicted to it, you may find it difficult give it up. First of all, you may become physically addicted to nicotine, that is in cigarettes. Secondly, you may develop into the habit of smoking and finally become mental addicted to it. Smoking may have all kind of harmful effects on the fitness of smokers and non-smokers around them. Not only does it affect your physical fitness, but also do damage to your heart and lungs, cause a variety of diseases. If you are a smoker, the bad smell may drive people around you away. However, it is important that you should quit smoking and live a health life. You can make the list of all the benefits you may get.

 

1.difficult后 加to 2. that---which 3. 删掉into 4. mental---mentally 5. kind---kinds 6. do---does 7. cause---causing 8. However---Therefore/Thus 9. health---healthy 10. the---a 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。短文阐述了很难戒烟的原因以及吸烟所产生的负面影响。建议人们戒烟,过健康的生活。 第一处:考查增加词。句意:但是如果你对它上瘾了,你会发现很难戒掉它。It is+形容词+for sb to do sth为固定句型。故difficult后加to. 第二处:考查关系代词。句意:首先,你可能会对香烟中的尼古丁上瘾。分析句子可知,nicotine为先行词在后面的非限制性定语从句作主语,所以关系代词为which。故that →which . 第三处:考查删除多余词。句意:第二,你可能会养成吸烟的习惯,最终会对它产生心理上的依赖。develop the habit of“养成...习惯”。 develop为及物动词后直接接宾语。故删掉into. 第四处:考查副词。句意:第二,你可能会养成吸烟的习惯,最终会对它产生心理上的依赖。mentally为副词修饰形容词addicted。故mental→ mentally. 第五处:考查名词。句意:吸烟可能对周围的吸烟者和非吸烟者的健康产生各种有害影响。all kinds of“各种各样”为固定短语。 故kind →kinds. 第六处:考查主谓一致。句意:它不仅会影响你的身体健康,还会损害你的心脏和肺部,导致各种疾病。分析句子可知,本句为一般现在时,本句为not only...but also引导的部分倒装句。主语为it,not only...but also连接动词affect和 do,所以用does。故do→ does . 第七处:考查现在分词。句意:它不仅会影响你的身体健康,还会损害你的心脏和肺部,导致各种疾病。分析句子可知,it与cause在逻辑上是主动关系,所以用现在分词causing。故cause → causing. 第八处:考查副词。句意:因此,重要的是你应该戒烟,过健康的生活。分析句子可知,前后两个句子为承接关系,所以用Therefore/Thus。故However→Therefore/Thus. 第九处:考查形容词。句意:因此,重要的是你应该戒烟,过健康的生活。healthy为形容词修饰名词life。 故health →healthy . 第十处:考查冠词。句意:你可以列出你能获得到的所有益处。make a list of “列举...”为固定短语。故 the→ a.
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