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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last October, while tending her garden, Lena Pahlsson pulled out a handful of small carrots and was about to throw it away. At that moment, a shiny object catch her attention. Surprisingly, she saw her long-lost wedding ring beneath the leafy top of one tiny carrot.

One day sixteen years early, Pahlsson removed diamond ring to cook a meal. When she wanted to put the rings back on later, it was gone. She thought that whether one of her three daughters —then ten, eight, and six— had picked it up, but the girls said they hadn’t. Pahlsson and her husband searched the kitchen, check every corner, but for vain. “I gave up hope of finding my ring,” she said. She never replaced it.

Pahlsson and her husband now think the ring probable got swept into a pile of kitchen rubbish and was spread over the garden, which it remained until the carrot’s leafy top accidentally sprouted (生长) through it. For Pahlsson, its return was a wonder.

 

it改为them catch改为caught early改为earlier removed后加入the或her rings改为ring thought that后的whether去掉 check改为checking for改为in probable改为probably which改为where 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了Lena Pahlsson在花园里采摘胡萝卜时,找到了丢失已久的结婚戒指的那种失而复得心情。 1.考查人称代词。句意:去年10月,莉娜·帕尔森(Lena Pahlsson)在照料花园时,拔了一把小胡萝卜,准备扔掉。此处carrots是名词复数,用them替代,故把it改为them。 2.考查时态。句意:这时,一个闪亮的物体引起了她的注意。根据At that moment可知句子用一般过去时态,故把catch改为caught。 3.考查比较级。句意:16年前的一天,Pahlsson摘下钻戒准备做饭。结合句意可知把early改为earlier。 4.考查物主代词或定冠词the。句意:16年前的一天,Pahlsson摘下钻戒准备做饭。此处ring是可数名词,结合句意可知在removed后加入the或her。 5.考查可数名词。句意:当她想把戒指放回去时,戒指不见了。根据第一段中的ring可知此处是单数名词,故把rings改为ring。 6.考查宾语从句。句意:她想她的三个女儿——当时分别是10岁、8岁和6岁——中的一个把它捡起来了,但女孩们说没有。结合句意可知此处是that引导的宾语从句,并没有疑问的意思,故把thought that后的whether去掉。 7.考查现在分词作伴随状语。句意:帕尔森和丈夫搜遍了厨房,检查了每一个角落,但一无所获。此处是现在分词作伴随状语,故把check改为checking。 8.考查固定词组。in vain“徒劳”,故把for改为in。 9.考查词性转化。句意:Pahlsson和她的丈夫现在认为戒指可能被扫进了厨房的垃圾堆。此处是副词修饰动词,故把probable改为probably。 10.考查定语从句。句意:现在,Pahlsson和她的丈夫认为这枚戒指很可能是被扫进了厨房的垃圾堆,然后散落在花园中,直到胡萝卜的叶子意外地从里面长出来,它仍然在那里。此处garden是先行词,在后面的定语从句中作地点状语,故把which改为where。
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B. A leading specialist in the study of liberal arts.

C. An English teacher in a university for the deaf.

D. Some senior experts in American Sign Language.

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B. sign language was too artificial to be widely accepted

C. a language should be easy to use and understand

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A. grown    B. changed

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