Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday I witnessed traffic accident on my way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while I heard a loud noise. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meter away. I went up and found the two drivers badly injured, bleeding or trapped in the taxis. Lucky, they were rescued in time because of people came to help them and called an ambulance. It was clear that the taxi drivers were such eager to take more passengers that they drive too fast. These drivers lacked responsibility for the safe of their passengers. What they did was dangerous for others as well as them.

Answer

traffic前面加上a

while →when

meter →meters

or →and

Lucky →Luckily

去掉of

such →so

drive →drove

safety →safe

them →themselves

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述了作者上星期天在回家的路上目睹的一起交通事故。

第一处：考查冠词。句意：上周日，我在回家的路上目睹了一场交通事故。accident是可数名词，这里表示一场交通事故，故在traffic前面加a。

第二处：考查连词。句意：我正在人行道上闲逛，这时候听到了一个大的声响。固定句式：be doing sth. when…正在做某事，这时候……。故while改为when。

第三处：考查名词复数。meter前面有ten修饰，故要用复数，“ten meters away”是“距离有10米远”。故将meter改为meters。

第四处：考查连词。两位司机的状况是卡在车里血流不止。将or改为and。

第五处：考查副词作状语。此处位于句首，作状语，用副词，意思为“幸运的是”。故将Lucky改为Luckily。

第六处：考查连词。because后接状语从句，because of后接名词或代词，此处后面是句子，of多余，故将of去掉。

第七处：考查副词。such修饰名词，so修饰形容词，故将such 改为so。

第八处：考查时态。根据上下文可知，全篇都是过去时态。故将drive改为drove。

第九处：考查名词。前面有定冠词the，后面是of，故此处应为名词，将safe改为safety。

第十处：考查代词。句意：他们所做的事情对自己和别人都很危险。用themselves指代the taxi drivers。故将them改为themselves。