假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉．
修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Many a student who wants to study abroad after high school dream of living in a fancy house． One approach to find accommodation（住所） is by applying to a dormitory through your school's official website． The other is by searching rental advertisements． Once you've found a place that interests you， there are many map applications， that can help you get an idea of the area．
During my stay in Sydney， I chose to rent a house． I moved four time in those two years． Their first place was a double room in a brand﹣new house having found on the internet． Since it was located closely to the university， the price was much higher as expected． In Australia， rent is paid on weekly basis， and you must pay four weeks of rent as a deposit（押金） when you move in． That was quite a financial burden．
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Perhaps there is no sport in the world more1. （connect） to sneakers（运动鞋） than basketball． Now， thanks to a new policy， the NBA will2. （strong） its status as the most stylish sports league in the world． When the 2018﹣2019NBA season kicked3. in October， the NBA lifted its color restrictions （限制） on players' sneakers． It is the first time in the league's 72﹣year history that it4.（allow） shoes to be of any color a player likes， as long as no reflective material5.（include）．
This landmark rule change is part of the NBA's collective effort to support players' "statements" on and off the court． "6. increasing number of people have come to realize that restrictions on the color of players' shoes actually limit7. （they） personal expression and storytelling，" CNN News noted． Kobe Bryant brought the low﹣top style of sneaker with a Mamba print to the forefront in 2008to symbolize the spirit of perseverance（毅力） and8. （brave）． Kyrie Irving of the Boston Celtics wears probably the9. （well﹣known） signature sneakers． Inspired by his mother， who died when he was four， he has a rose on one side of his shoe to represent her．
There is no end to the stories about sneakers in basketball． It's certain that they will remain a platform10. players express their ideas and personalities．
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1.Both of the approaches are effective and it's really a matter of personal p_____ which one to choose．
2.She now works a f_____ schedule in order to have more time to spend with her children．
3.To be honest， Nick's performance wasn't interesting and it didn't a_____ to me much．
4.The famous writer's new book d_____ to be published next year receives widespread attention in the national media．
5.Life is a cup， and under most c_____， it's up to you to decide whether it's a drinking cup or a toothbrush cup．
6.Many citizens are o_____ to building a big market in this area． They don't think it is a wise decision．
7.A_____ as the successor to the company， the youngest son took office in no time．
8.We need to identify the actual and p_____ problems． Then we can deal with them effectively．
9.I'm quite sure that it is a_____ impossible for me to finish the task in only two days without anyone to help me．
10.Each of us needs to c_____ at least 5 liters of water per day， and everything we eat and drink contains water．
11.They are faced with financial problems． It is not an a_____ time to mention the subject of money．
Last summer， I had just enough money saved to buy a golden ticket﹣a 3﹣month train pass that would take me to the furthest reaches of Europe． Excited for my journey， I _______ all the necessary stuff﹣_______ the guidebook．
While the _______ of the Internet was definitely a _______ factor to my decision， this was not the only reason I decided to fly _______．
To be honest， I find the guidebook_______ a journey﹣like a bossy aunt who is always telling you what to do，_______ she doesn't always know what's best．_______ has taught me that there is a clear _______ between a tourist and a traveler．
While waiting in a queue to see Michelangelo's Statue of David in Florence， I met a man who showed me his _______ of "Top 20 Things to do in Italy" and told us _______ that he'd "seen" everything Italy has to _______ in just four days．
The problem I had with this man's way of _______ was that he was too focused on _______ the boxes provided by his guidebook． He was _______ in the so﹣called "must﹣sees" and blind to all that was happening somewhere else．
So， guidebook﹣less as we were， my companion and I traveled to Estonia． Arriving for no good reason， we had no option but to _______ some friendly faces for advice． We _______ ourselves and asked them what was happening around town． When this resulted in an _______ to a beautiful Estonian home by a river where we enjoyed a 110﹣degree wood﹣stove sauna（桑拿），_______ picked forest﹣mushrooms and the good _______ of our five new﹣found Estonian friends， we sure were glad we had left our bossy aunt at home．
1.A. loaded B. collected C. packed D. selected
2.A. except B. with C. including D. besides
3.A. competence B. convenience C. instance D. performance
4.A. demanding B. contributing C. striking D. thrilling
5.A. around B. away C. abroad D. alone
6.A. limits B. influences C. confuses D. encourages
7.A. in case B. as though C. even though D. if only
8.A. Regulation B. Communication C. Intelligence D. Experience
9.A. relationship B. connection C. similarity D. distinction
10.A. list B. book C. file D. summary
11.A. loudly B. positively C. proudly D. happily
12.A. recommend B. offer C. discover D. order
13.A. traveling B. planning C. preparing D. drafting
14.A. counting B. following C. drawing D. ticking
15.A. involved B. interested C. lost D. engaged
16.A. approach B. grab C. spot D. seize
17.A. presented B. helped C. introduced D. forced
18.A. application B. access C. entrance D. invitation
19.A. skillfully B. randomly C. joyfully D. locally
20.A. quality B. company C. possession D. advice
The Science of Risk-Seeking
Sometimes we decide that a little unnecessary danger is worth it because when we weigh the risk and the reward, the risk seems worth taking. 1. Some of us enjoy activities that would surprise and scare the rest of us. Why? Experts say it may have to do with how our brains work?
The reason why any of us take any risks al all might have to do with early humans. Risk-takers were better at hunting, fighting, or exploring. 2. As the quality of risk-taking was passed from one generation to the next, humans ended up with a sense of adventure and a tolerance for risk.
So why aren’t we all jumping out of airplanes then? Well, even 200,000 years ago, too much risk-taking could get one killed. A few daring survived, though, along with a few stay-in-the-cave types. As a result, humans developed a range of character types that still exists today. So maybe you love car racing, or maybe you hate it. 3.
No matter where you are on the risk-seeking range, scientists say that your willingness to take risks increases during your teenage years. 4. To help you do that, your brain increases your hunger for new experiences. New experiences often mean taking some risks, so your brain raises your tolerance for risk as well.
5. For the risk-seekers a part of the brain related to pleasure becomes active, while for the rest of us, a part of the brain related to fear becomes active.
As experts continue to study the science of risk-seeking, we’ll continue to hit the mountains, the waves or the shallow end of the pool.
A. It all depends on your character.
B. Those are the risks you should jump to take.
C. Being better at those things meant a greater chance of survival.
D. Thus, these well-equipped people survived because they were the fittest.
E. This is when you start to move away from your family and into the bigger world.
F. However, we are not all using the same reference standard to weigh risks and rewards.
G. New brain research suggests our brains work differently when we face a nervous situation.
The idea of progress started to flower in the 17th century． At that time， many wise thinkers believed that man liberated（解放） by reason would rise to greater heights of achievement． The many expressions of human nature would be the engines of progress： language， business， science， and moral sensibility （道德感）． Unfortunately， most of those engines have failed to bring the desired human progress．
The modern age has belonged to material progress and its main source has been science． Science gives people huge power to change the world． But can people be trusted to use it always for good？ Think of biotechnology and information technology． And it is not just that scientific progress does not deliver the emotional good． People also fear that mankind is failing to manage science properly． The forests are disappearing； the ice is melting； privacy is leaking； life is becoming a depressing march in an ugly world．
The point is not that science is harmful， but that scientific progress needs to be mapped tidily onto human progress． That relies on moral sensibility in its widest sense． This liberal force offers hope for a better future． The very idea of moral sensibility probably sounds out﹣of﹣date． Bur researchers find that people desire a sense of moral purpose which would give life dignity （尊严）． People want to determine how the world works， not always to be determined by it． Moral sensibility is why people will suffer from their beliefs， and why acts of noble self﹣sacrifice are so powerful．
It is admitted that our moral ideals will never be realized completely． But sometimes， however imperfectly， we can make progress． Human dignity requires the love of ideals for their own sake， but nothing requires that the love be returned．
Human progress is neither guaranteed nor hopeless． Instead， it is up to us．
1.What do we know about human progress from Paragraph 1？
A. Human beings were greatly liberated by the idea of progress．
B. Language failed to serve as an expression of human progress．
C. People began to think about human progress in the 17th century．
D. Many thinkers in the 17th century were optimistic about human progress．
2.Why does science fail to bring the desired human progress？
A. Scientific progress does not give people dignity．
B. Proper governing is not guaranteed in the use of science．
C. Science is misunderstood because of improper management．
D. The engine of progress is sensitive and unreliable．
3.What does the underlined phrase in Paragraph 3 refer to？
A. Depressing life
B. Harmful science
C. Human progress
D. Moral sensibility
4.What is the main purpose of the passage？
A. To stress the function of the idea of progress．
B. To express concern about the death of moral sensibility．
C. To show the importance of moral sensibility in human progress．
D. To blame the harm of material progress to human development．
