假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear David,
I am Lihua, a senior high school students. I have recently learnt on the Internet what you are helping students with spoken English by offer an online course. I am writing to ask you for some help.
I have been learnt English for more than four years and I really like English. However, my spoken English is such poor that I can not communicate with foreigners free. My broken English always discourages you from opening my mouth. I am really worrying. I hope you can help me with my spoken English. I believe that I can make a progress with your help.
I would appreciate it if you could agree help me. I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Lihua
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
Elias’ Story
Elias, a poor worker in South Africa, said that the time 1. he first met Nelson Mandela was a very difficult period of his life. In 1952, he 2. (go) to see Nelson Mandela, a black lawyer for advice. Mandela was generous with his time, for which Elias was very grateful.
He began school at six, but he had to leave school two years later because3. (he) family couldn’t afford the school fees and the bus fare. As 4. result, he had very little education. After 5. (try) hard, he got a job in a gold mine. However, to live in Johannesburg, one had got to have a passbook. Not having one, because he was not born there, he worried about 6. he would become out of work.
Then Mandela helped him, telling him how to get the correct papers 7. (stay) in Johannesburg. He became more hopeful about his future and later joined the ANC Youth League 8.(organize) by Mandela. Just as Mandela put it, the blacks were so 9. (bad) treated that they had reached a stage where they had almost no rights at all.
In 1963, he helped Mandela blow up some government 10. (build). He knew that only by answering violence with violence could they achieve their dream of making black and white people equal.
That was when my son was 6 years old. My son is now 22 but whenever I look at him even as a grown man, I remember the small child with _______ .
Our cat was ______to give birth. And like all young children, my son was very interested in the birth of the babies. During the following week, he never stopped ________me for a chance to witness it. At last, I agreed. I answered all his questions and prepared him the best _____he might not be shocked or frightened.
That _____when my son arrived home, one baby cat had been born. He was so_______at what he saw that he would put his hand on the mother cat’s stomach and feel the other babies ______ . When the mother cat began to ______ very loudly, it was clear that the second baby was on its way. My son ______ but never said a word. Then he asked me, “Mum, why does she cry so loudly when the baby comes?” I _________that it was not a hurtful pain but a pain of great pleasure_______the mother.
When the______of the third baby was coming by the crying of the mother cat, my son ______ hugged (拥抱) me with tears ____ his face, saying, “Mum, I’m sorry for the _____I brought you to have me.” My heart almost stopped. With a(n) _________choice of words, I told him that his birth had brought me______but smiles, and that I would like to ______ it 100 times.
Now my son is a grown man, but he always _________that night, for it was on that night that he finally _______ what the word “love” meant.
1.A. smiles B. tears C. interest D. care
2.A. willing B. determined C. ready D. upset
3.A. begging B. searching C. thanking D. commanding
4.A. unless B. until C. as if D. so that
5.A. morning B. afternoon C. noon D. night
6.A. amazed B. frightened C. angry D. sad
7.A. jumping B. sleeping C. moving D. growing
8.A. laugh B. cough C. cry D. shout
9.A. watched B. noticed C. found D. responded
10.A. realized B. explained C. expressed D. added
11.A. in B. with C. on D. for
12.A. loss B. birth C. performance D. protection
13.A. suddenly B. peacefully C. actually D. naturally
14.A. calming down B. rolling down C. setting down D. turning down
15.A. pain B. trial C. cruelty D. violence
16.A. hopeful B. careful C. useless D. informal
17.A. something B. anything C. nothing D. everything
18.A. join in B. suffer from C. dream of D. go through
19.A. regrets B. remembers C. ignores D. prefers
20.A. understood B. decided C. admitted D. doubted
Taking good notes is a time-saving skill that will help you to become a batter student in several ways. 1. Second, your notes are excellent materials to refer to when you are studying for a test. Third, note-taking offers variety to your study time and helps you to hold your interest.
You will want to take notes during classroom discussions and while reading a textbook or doing research for a report. 2. Whenever or however you take notes, keep in mind that note-taking is a selective process. 3.
The following methods may work best for you.
● Read the text quickly to find the main facts and ideas in it.
● Carefully read the text and watch for words that can show main points and supporting facts.
● Write your notes in your own words.
● 4.
● Note any questions or ideas you may have about what was said or written.
As you take notes, you may want to use your own shorthand(速记). When you do, be sure that you understand your symbols and that you use them all the time. 5.
A. Use words not complete sentences.
B. There are three practical note-taking methods.
C. You must write your notes on separate paper.
D. Otherwise, you may not be able to read your notes later.
E. you will also want to develop your own method for taking notes.
F. That means you must first decide what is important enough to include in your notes.
G. First, the simple act of writing something down makes it easier for you to understand and remember it.
People in the United States honor their parents with two special days：Mother’s Day, on the second Sunday in May, and Father’s Day, on the third Sunday in June. These days are set aside to show love and respect for parents. They raise their children and educate them to be responsible (有责任感的) citizens. They give love and care. These two days make us think about the changing roles of mothers and fathers. More mothers now work outside the home. More fathers must help with child care.
These two special days are celebrated in many different ways. On Mother’s Day people wear carnations. A red one symbolizes a living mother. A white one shows that the mother is dead. Many people attend religious services to honor parents. It is also a day when people whose parents are dead visit the cemetery (墓地). On these days families get together at home, as well as in restaurants. They often have outdoor barbecues for Father’s Day. These are days of fun and good feelings and memories.
Another tradition is to give cards and gifts. Children make them in school. Many people make their own presents. These are valued more than the ones bought in stores. It is not the value of the gift that is important, but it is “the thought that counts”. Greeting card stores, florists, candy makers, bakeries, telephone companies, and other stores do a lot of business during these holidays.
1.Which of the following is NOT a reason for children to show love and respect for parents?
A. Parents bring up children.
B. Parents give love and care to children.
C. Parents educate children to be good persons.
D. Parents pass away before children grow up.
2.What do you think “florists” do?
A. They sell flowers.
B. They make and sell bread.
C. They offer enough room for having family parties.
D. They sell special gifts for Mother’s Day and Father’s Day.
3.What do you know from the passage?
A. Mother’s Day and Father’s Day are both in May.
B. Fewer women worked outside the home in the past.
C. Not all the children respect their parents
D. Fathers are not as important as mothers at home.
4.On Mother’s Day and Father’s Day, ________.
A. people usually have family parties
B. everyone goes to visit the cemetery.
C. children always go to parents’ home
D. hand-made cards are the most valuable gifts
What do you think of cats? Some people think very lovely. But not all people love cats. Compared with dogs, cats seem to be very lazy and unfriendly. Besides, cats are not known for acts of selflessness (无私). But maybe we’re wrong about them. Don’t believe it? Then meet Pippa, a very unusual cat.
The black-and-white cat was left in a box outside a shop and taken by the British RSPCA to the Jansa family in Whitstable, Kent. They really loved her character (性格) and decided to adopt (收养) it，but they never guessed she’d become a lifesaver.
Eight-year-old Mia Jansa had diabetes and had become good at testing her blood during the day, as well as having something to eat or drink to bring her blood sugar levels back. But the danger was at night. Mia could easily experience hypoglycemic (低血糖症的) situations when she was asleep, which could cause even death.
Soon after she was adopted, Pippa went into Mia’s bedroom in the middle of the night and woke her up. When the child tested her blood sugar levels, she found they were dangerously low. Ever since, Pippa always visits Mia at night. If she can’t get her to wake up, she raises the alarm.
“Pippa does this of her own accord,” says Mia’s mother Laura. “We don’t make a request for caring because we don’t want to encourage wrong alarms. She gets plenty of hugs. It gives me peace of mind and I know someone else is keeping an eye on Mia.”
Now the family is so happy that they’ve chosen to adopt it in the first place.
1.Why did the family decide to adopt the cat?
A. Because they considered it as a lifesaver.
B. Because her character interested them.
C. Because they really loved her looks.
D. Because Mia Jansa needed help.
2.What problem did Mia Jansa face?
A. She was bad at testing her blood.
B. She might suffer death in the daytime.
C. She might be in danger while asleep at night.
D. She couldn’t let her blood sugar levels return to normal.
3.For what does Pippa visit Mia at night?
A. To see if her blood sugar levels are normal.
B. To make her laugh when she’s lonely.
C. To make sure that she is safe.
D. To play with the alarm.
4.What does the underlined sentence in Paragraph 5 mean?
A. Pippa does that according to her own habits.
B. Pippa does that without being asked.
C. Pippa does that for her own good.
D. Pippa does that without a purpose.
