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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^ ),并在其下面写出该加的同。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该同下面写出修改后的同。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The Moments(朋友圈) section of WeChat has become the popular part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about their life on it with our friend. Many teenagers, however, chose to keep their parents out their Moments. They argue that if their parents get involved, and they will feel upset. As far as I am concerning, I feel happily when my parents comment on my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and care for me. What's more, shut them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, when inviting them in would help us communicate better and feel closer to each other than before.

 

第一句 the改成a 第二句 their改成our;friend改成friends 第三句 chose改成choose;out后加 of 第四句 删除and 第五句 concerning改成concerned;happily改成happy 第七句 shut改成shutting;when改成while 【解析】 本文讲述了一些年轻人把父母屏蔽在微信朋友圈之外,文章指出这种做法的错误之处,并建议我们让父母参与到我们的朋友圈之中,这有利于双方的交流。 第一处:考查不定冠词。不定冠词a/an通常表示泛指,修饰可数名词单数形式。句意:微信朋友圈已经成为这个社交网络平台上一个很受欢迎的部分了。 第二处:考查代词。本句主语是we,应该使用物主代词our和we保持一致。句意:我们在朋友圈上和我们的朋友分享我们生活中的所有事情。 第三处:考查名词单复数及生活常识。通常来说人们生活中的朋友不止一人,所以使用复数形式friends。句意:我们在朋友圈上和我们的朋友分享我们生活中的所有事情。 第四处:考查时态。本文介绍了一些人把父母亲排除在微信朋友圈之外,全文都使用一般现在时。所以本句谓语动词也应该使用一般现在时的形式choose。 第五处:考查固定短语。短语keep… out of…使…在...之外;名词短语their Moments做介词out of的宾语。 第六处:考查连词。本句动词argue的宾语是宾语从句if their parents get involved, and they will feel upset.其中if引导了条件状语从句,后面应该是主句,不应该再有连词连接,所以要删除that。句意:他们争论说,如果父母亲参与了,他们会感觉难受。 第七处:考查固定句式。固定句式As far as I am concerned在我看来,就我而言。原句中的concerning是一个介词,意为“关于…”。 第八处:考查形容词。在英语形容词通常做定语或者表语,修饰名词。本句中形容词happy和系动词feel一起构成系表结构。 第九处:考查动名词做主语。本句中情态动词may make….的前面应该是主语部分,而动词原形是不能在句中做主语的,所以使用动名词短语shutting them off在句中做主语。 第十处:考查连词。连词while有多层含有,本句意为“然而”,表示上下文轻微的转折关系。句意“而且,不让父母参与你的朋友圈会让代沟越来越大,然而邀请他们进入你的朋友圈会帮助我们更好地交流并比以往感觉更紧密。”  
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The tea plant6.(grow) best in tropical and temperate places where rain falls throughout the year. Teas can be grown from sea level7.about 2,000 metres, but the best quality grows in higher regions.

Tea comes from the leaves and buds of tea plants. Wild plants can be up to 9 metres high, however, on tea plantations,8.( pull ) the leaves 9. (easy) , people cut them back to a bush of about a metre in height. It takes a plant three to five years before it is ready for picking.

A picker can harvest about 20 kg of tea10.day. On large tea plantations the leaves are harvested by machines, but the quality of tea is higher when the leaves are picked by hand.

 

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It was Thanksgiving and I was volunteering with my mother at a ____ for the needy. We stood behind the counter ____ food to whoever came in. It seemed that most of our diners had been having  _____ times. Their clothes were ragged, worn and dry; they were hungry and tired. ____ , they looked needy!

When we were busy with the unlucky fellows, a well-dressed man came in who looked ____  but poor. I wondered what he was doing there and my jaw dropped in_____ when he joined the line for food. The closer he came to my service station, the more I muttered. What was this man doing? I wanted to know. Surely he wasn’t going to take the food_____ for those really in need! He had small talks with ____ and the look on his face suggested that he just wished to_____ being alone.

Then my mother_____ took me to one side, saying, “You have_____ that the needs of the people who come here must be purely____ : hunger, inadequate shelter, clothing, etc. But this gentleman seems to have none of those problems. What if his needs are emotional? What if he needs _____, friends, or just to be among other human beings?” Her words _____  me like a ton of bricks! I felt like I should apologize to the man, but I didn’t.

About a week later, from an ______source, the shelter received a large donation. I can’t help but______ if it came from that man.

Now, whenever I meet others, I remember my mother’s words and try to send kindness and blessings to them,______how they look. Needs aren’t always visible. Maybe emotional _____ is not only the loneliest feeling, but the most difficult need to get ____ . But kindness always makes a difference.

1.A. immediate B. universal C. obvious D. similar

2.A. station B. hospital C. canteen D. shelter

3.A. distributing B. processing C. appointing D. reserving

4.A. enjoyable B. smooth C. rough D. permanent

5.A. In vain B. In Brief C. In particular D. In contrast

6.A. anything B. nothing C. everything D. something

7.A. sorrow B. amazement C. delight D. relief

8.A. lent B. paid C. meant D. rewarded

9.A. the organizer B. the volunteer C. the donor D. the poor

10.A. escape B. appreciate C. compromise D. represent

11.A. violently B. quietly C. angrily D. curiously

12.A. grasped B. supposed C. doubted D. confirmed

13.A. practical B. mental C. personal D. physical

14.A. food B. income C. comfort D. clothes

15.A. hit B. persuaded C. attracted D. injured

16.A. unbelievable B. unique C. unwilling D. unknown

17.A. forecast B. wonder C. imagine D. reflect

18.A. regardless of B. but for C. apart from D. due to

19.A. support B. character C. behavior D. hunger

20.A. advocated B. solved C. met D. provided

 

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Tips for Using Google Maps When You Travel

Traveling somewhere new can bring exciting adventures. But it can also bring unwelcome surprises. That may be in the tools you use before and during your trip. With the right technology, you can make the most of your time on the road. 1. While people most commonly use Google Maps for directions from one place to another, it offers many other kinds of travel tools. Today, we bring you several tips for using Google Maps.

1.Plan a road trip route

When you are traveling on a road trip, you do not have to plan each part of the trip separately with Google Maps. 2. To plan a road trip, open Google Maps. Search for your first destination, and then click on the arrow to get directions. Then ,click on the plus + sign to add more destinations to your trip.

2.Save your maps for offline use

3. Or you may not want to pay international charges for using your phone in other countries. The good news is that you can still use Google Maps even without the Internet. You can download a map from Google Maps to your phone. To do this, open the Google Maps app on your phone and search for the area you want to save. Click on the address at the bottom of the screen, then choose Download.

3.Use Google Maps for a walk or bike ride

While Google Maps may first give users directions to a place by car, it also offers biking or walking directions.4. The results also tell you the elevation change of the route, so you know how much energy you will have to use by choosing to walk or ride a bicycle.

4.Save money on gas

If you are planning a car trip in North America, Google Maps can show you the lowest gas prices in the United States and Canada. Search for “gas stations” on the Google Maps app and you will see a list of nearby stations with gas prices.5. Therefore, Google Maps is really a great convenience to tourists.

A. Google Maps has many tech tools that help make traveling easier.

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C. You can get those directions by clicking the walking or bicycle icon.

D. The “gas stations” on the Google Maps app are sometimes difficult to find.

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F. The apps and maps are of great help when people are going to a store or supermarket.

G. You can search for all of the parts of the trip in order to prepare your route more efficiently.

 

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    When you think of a jungle adventure, what comes to mind? Are they gorgeous birds flying through the air or monkeys jumping through the forest? Do you think of plants? Probably not. After all, plants aren’t the most exciting living things in the world. They just sit there and absorb water and nutrients from the soil and the sun. But actually there are also some plants that eat insects and even small animals from time to time. We call these unusual things carnivorous(食肉性) plants. Although most carnivorous plants eat small insects, larger carnivorous plants in some hot and wet areas have been known to capture rats, birds, and frogs.

One carnivorous plant many people are familiar with is the Venus flytrap. Its unique “jaws” will function when flies and other small insects touch it. Once its jaws close on its victim, it produces a chemical substance that breaks down the insect and absorbs the insect’s nutrients.

There are several other examples of carnivorous plants. For example, some plants can catch insects with their leaves, which are like a tall narrow wineglass, while some trap their victims with sticky tentacles(触手). And some growing in ponds and streams absorb their victims like underwater cleaners. Carnivorous plants tend to grow in areas where the soil is very thin and lacks necessary nutrients. These plants must find other sources for the nutrients they need.

Trapping and eating insects allows these unique plants to survive. Unfortunately, human and environmental factors continue to threaten the limited environments where you can find wild carnivorous plants.

Still for many people, the thought of a plant eating an animal seems very strange. In fact, more than one person has turned the idea into a scary story or movie. Carnivorous plants don’t pose any danger to humans, though. Unless you’re the size of a tiny insect, you don’t have to worry about falling prey to a Venus flytrap.

1.What can we learn about the Venus flytrap?

A. It produces a special smell to attract insects.

B. It is the most important carnivorous plant.

C. It catches insects with its unique “jaws”.

D. It is a kind of poisonous plant.

2.Why do carnivorous plants hunt animals for food?

A. They try to reduce the harmful insects. B. They help keep the balance of nature.

C. They need some nutrients to survive. D. They enjoy the taste of animals.

3.What’s the challenge faced by carnivorous plants?

A. Trapping and eating them from human beings. B. Poorer environments to live in.

C. Threats from bigger animals. D. Limited choices of food.

4.What can be the best title for the passage?

A. Human’s influence towards insects B. Potential dangers in the jungle

C. Plants that eat living things D. Various survival skills of plants

 

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    An international group of coffee experts has considered Ethiopia’s coffee as the best in the world. Coffee is a top export of the country. But at home, it is seen as national pride. Ethiopians feel good about their coffee, and enjoying a drink with friends is a long tradition.

International coffee experts travel the world to find the best coffee. They keep returning to Ethiopia. Some people say the climate produces quality beans. Morton Wenner is a coffee importer. He said, “Ethiopia has different ancient types of coffee. They are planted in places with perfect soil, perfect altitude, and climates that are really suitable for coffee processing, such as drying and things like that.”

Finding the best quality beans is often an issue of taste. The process is known as cupping — tasting and comparing coffee from different roasted beans, grading and then pricing them.

But before international experts come to taste, coffee beans are studied in small coffee laboratories. Helen Assefa, a lab technician, describes the process, “When the coffee comes to the lab, we assess its quality first by recording the details. Then we weigh the wetness level and screen the beans for analysis. After that we polish the coffee beans and taste the samples. At the end we check for imperfect beans.”

Ethiopia is making big profits on its coffee reputation by exporting coffee to more than 120 countries. The country has an export income of more than $840 million a year. But not all the best coffee leaves Ethiopia. Forty percent of the coffee grown in the country stays there. It remains an important part of everyday life at work, at home and at ceremonies just to celebrate that special cup.

1.Where does the Ethiopian’s pride mainly come from?

A. Traditional practices. B. Food export. C. International experts. D. Best coffee.

2.Ethiopia produces best coffee because of ____________.

A. the special coffee taste B. the long-standing tradition

C. the satisfactory mild climate D. the favorable growing environment

3.Which of the following describes the process of studying coffee beans in the lab?

a. polish and taste

b. weigh the dampness level

c. record quality facts

d. analyze the beans

e. check for imperfection

A. d-c-b-a-e B. c-b-d-a-e C. e-c-a-b-d D. c-d-a-b-e

4.What can we learn from the last paragraph?

A. Coffee is essential in Ethiopians’ daily lives.

B. Coffee is the most profitable industry in Ethiopia.

C. Most of the coffee production remains in Ethiopia.

D. Ethiopians often hold ceremonies to celebrate harvest.

 

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