Question

假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。校刊英语栏以“A Man/Woman of Achievement”为题征集英文短文，请你根据题目投稿，稿件词数不少于60，内容包括:

1.人物基本信息;

2.人物主要事迹;

3.该人物对你的影响。

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Answer

Ma Yun, the founder of Alibaba Group, is considered a man of achievement in the world.

Ma Yun was born and educated in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province. He used to teach English in the college and then set up China's first Internet-based company. His talent and efforts led to great success and benefit millions of people home and abroad. For example, the Taobao website, established by him, has become the largest trading website in China, bringing convenience to the life of the people all over the world.

Whatever difficulties he came across, he never gave up. His spirit always inspires me to face the challenges in life and encourages me to make up my mind to become a person who can make a difference in the world.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英文征文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英文征文；假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。校刊英语栏以“A Man/Woman of Achievement”为题征集英文短文，请你根据题目投稿，稿件词数不少于60，内容包括：1.人物基本信息；2.人物主要事迹；3.该人物对你的影响。人称使用第一、三人称，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be considered（被认为），used to do sth.（曾经做某事），lead to（导致），inspire sb. to do sth.（激励某人做某事）, make up one’s mind to sth.（下决心做某事）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。