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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一橫线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2.只允许修改10,多者(从第11处起)不计分

Everyone should take the action to reduce haze (雾霾), which is harmless to our health. First of allI believe that if we plant more treethere will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes (尾气) from carsthus reduce pollution. Secondthe government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens ride bikes if they travel short journeys.

 

【解析】 1.句意:每个人都应该采取措施减少雾霾,它对人的身体是有害的。take action采取措施,故把take the action中的the去掉。 2.句意:每个人都应该采取措施减少雾霾,它对人的身体是有害的。.harmless无害的,harmful有害的,故把 .harmless→harmful。 3.句意:如果我们种更多的树,在我们的城市将有更少的雾霾。可知tree用复数形式,故把tree---trees。 4. 句意:如果我们种更多的树,在我们的城市将有更少的雾霾。“是我们的城市”故把their---our。 5.句意:树能将吸收来自汽车的尾气,因此减少污染。此处是现在分词做自然的结果状语,故把reduce---reducing。 6.句意:政府应该惩罚那些排放尾气多的工厂。此处factories做先行词,指物,在后面的定语从句中做主语,故把where→which。 7.句意:尾气是雾霾的主要原因,对人的身体造成极大的伤害。句中主语是Exhaust fumes,复数形式,故把is---are。 8. 句意:尾气是雾霾的主要原因,对人的身体造成极大的伤害。形容词修饰名词,故把greatly→great。 9.句意:我认为鼓励人们使用公共交通是一个极好的主意。根据句意可知用一般现在时态,故把was---is。 10.句意:最后但同样重要的是,我们可以呼吁市民短途旅行骑自行车。call on sb. to do sth. 呼吁某人做某事,故在citizens ride中加to。  
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