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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Steven,

I really appreciate that you have been paying close attention to the Calligraphy Contest. I’m writing provide you with some relevant informations.

Aimed at encouraging us to learn traditional culture but attach great importance to handwriting, the Calligraphy Contest of our school enjoying a huge success. A large number of students and even some teachers took an active part in it, which the participants handed in our satisfying works which were later graded by Calligraphy masters. And then the excellently ones were exhibited to the public. As far as I’m concern, this kind of activity benefit us a lot. Calligraphy is very meaningful and gives us peace of mind as well.

The contest will also be held the next year. You’ re welcome to enter for it, too.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

第二句:writing后面加to 第二句:informations→information 第三句:but→and 第三句:enjoying→enjoyed 第四句:第一个which→where 第四句:our→their 第五句:excellently→excellent 第六句:concern→concerned 第六句:benefit→benefits 第八句:next前面的the去掉 【解析】 这是一篇书信。文章中李华向Steven介绍了书法比赛的一些相关的情况。 第一处:考查固定短语。句意:我写信是想向你提供一些相关的信息。write to写信给……,该短语是固定短语,所以writing后面加to。 第二处:考查名词。information是不可数名词,所以informations改为information。 第三处:考查连词。句意:为了鼓励我们学习传统文化,并且重视书法,我们学校的书法比赛取得了巨大的成功。文中表示并列关系,所以but改为and。 第四处:考查时态。描述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以enjoying改为enjoyed。 第五处:考查非限制性定语从句。这里含有一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是it,关系词在从句中作地点状语,所以第四句第一个which改为where。 第六处:考查代词。句意:很多学生甚至一些老师都积极参与其中,参与者提交了他们满意的作品,这些作品后来被书法大师评分。文中表示“他们的作品”,所以our改为their。 第七处:考查形容词。该空修饰ones,用形容词,所以excellently改为excellent。 第八处:考查固定用法。句意:就我而言,这种活动让我们受益匪浅。as far as I’m concerned就我而言,该用法是固定用法,所以concern改为concerned。 第九处:考查主谓一致。在一般现在时中,主语this kind of activity是第三人称单数,谓语动词用单数,所以benefit改为benefits。 第十处:考查固定用法。句意:比赛也将在明年举行。明年直接说next year,所以next前面的the去掉。  
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