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假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线(____),并在该词下面写出修饰后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起),不计分。

Dear Jim

So glad that you are interested in my new flat. Now I would like tell you something about it. Locating in the north of the city, this Residential Center is small with only six building. My flat, which covers the area of 36 square meters, is in the fourth floor. It consisted of a sitting room, a bedroom, a kitchen and a toilet. When you enter into the flat, you will find yourself in the sitting room. The sitting room is the part that I like best, because it is brightly with a lovely balcony(阳台), which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below. Although my flat is small, I like them very much because it is comfortable.

Best regards,

 

1. like后加to 2. Locating→located   3. building→buildings 4. the area→an area   5. in the fourth floor中的in→on   6. consist→consists   7. enter into中的into去掉 8. brightly→bright   9. which→where 10. I like them中的them→it 【解析】 本文主要介绍自己房屋。 第一处:考查不定式。would like to do something“想要做某事”, 为固定搭配。故like后加to。 第二处:考查非谓语动词。this Residential Center 与locate之间为动宾关系,因此用过去分词作状语。故Locating改为Located。 第三处:考查名词。building是可数名词,有six修饰,用复数。故building改为buildings。 第四处:考查冠词。句意:我的公寓有36平方米,在2号楼第四层。an area of...“......的面积”是固定词组,area以元音音素开头。故the改为an。 第五处:考查介词。on the fourth floor“在第四层上”,介词用on不用in。故in改为on。 第六处:考查动词时态和语态。句意:它由一间起居室、一间卧室、一间厨房和一间卫生间组成。consist of“由......组成”,此处讲述现在存在的状态,主语是第三人称单数,故consisted改为consists。 第七处:考查动词。句意:当你进入公寓,你就进入了起居室。enter是及物动词,直接接宾语。故去掉into。 第八处:考查形容词。is是系动词,后跟形容词构成系表结构。故brightly改为bright。 第九处:考查定语从句。分析句子成分可知,______I can enjoy the beautiful garden below是非限制性定语从句,修饰balcony,关系词在从句中作地点状语,用where。故which改为where。 第十处:考查代词。句意:尽管我的公寓是小的,我非常喜欢它,因为它是舒适的。此处指上文提到的my flat,是单数。故them改为it。  
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