Question

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你的职业规划。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：

1. 你希望从事的职业；

2. 你选择该职业的原因；

3. 你打算为之做何准备。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Jim,

How is everything going? I am glad to receive your e-mail, in which you asked me about my career plan for the future. Now I am writing to share it with you in details.

I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited the Xinhua News Agency, the top one in China, last year. I chose it as my career based on the following two reasons. First, it is a job that can get me exposed to new things every day and thus keep me energetic and passionate all the time since I really hate to follow the same routine every day. Second, working as a journalist can help realize my childhood dream of being a hero by fighting against evil and spreading justice.

To achieve this goal, I plan to apply for the Communication University of China, whose major, Journalism, has been ranked the first for many years in a row across the whole country. After getting my Bachelor Degree of Journalism, I will continue my study in a world-famous university to broaden my horizons to better fit my future post.

That is all about my career plan. What do you think of it? I am looking forward to hearing yours if you have got one.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Jim,

How is everything going? I’m delighted to receive your e-mail, in which you asked me about my career plan for the future. Presently, I’m writing to share it with you in details.

I made up my mind to be a Chinese teacher after becoming a student of science. There exist several reasons that account for my choice. To begin with, it’s an occupation that can get me exposed to mild atmosphere where I can spread all the knowledge I’ve acquired, thus keeping me energetic and passionate all the time. In addition, working as a Chinese teacher can help me realize my ideal of being an erudite scholar. To achieve this goal, I’m scheduled to apply for the Normal University of Capital, whose major, Chinese Language and Literature, has been ranked the first for many years in a row across the whole city. After getting my Bachelor Degree of Chinese Language and Literature, I’ll continue my study in a world-famous university to broaden my horizons to better fit my future post.

To sum up, actions speak louder than words. No matter how hard the future road is, I’ll spare no efforts to make my dream into the reality.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你的职业规划。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 你希望从事的职业；2. 你选择该职业的原因；3. 你打算为之做何准备。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be glad to（高兴），career plan（职业规划），in details（详细地），make up one’s mind（下定决心）；get sb. exposed to（使某人接触到）；energetic and passionate（有活力和）；fight against evil and spreading justice（打击犯罪，传播正义）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。