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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last weekend, my British friend, Jim, spotted paper-cutting stand when we were wandering on the street. Had never seen paper-cuts, he immediately bought one. Therefore, the seller shook her head at the moment she saw the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to her. She had no changes! How disappointed Jim was! He was about to quit while I took out my cellphone, scan the QR code on the stand and paid five yuan. Jim was very surprising. I explained to her that nowadays we could pay with a cellphone for almost everything. “Wow! ” Jim said, “The paper-cut looks great, and the payment method seems even great!”

 

Spotted后加a Had →Having Therefore →However at the moment at去掉 changes →change While →when scan →scanned surprising →surprised her →him great →greater 【解析】 本文属于记叙文,讲述作者与朋友去逛街购买剪纸,由于没有零钱,差点放弃,但是作者用手机支付解决了朋友的难题,这让朋友很惊讶。 第一处:考查冠词。句意:上周末,我和我的朋友Jim闲逛的时候,他看到一个卖剪纸的摊点。由于第一次提及摊位,stand为可数名词,故用不定冠词,spotted后加a。 第二处:考查非谓语动词。句意:从来没见过剪纸,他立刻买了一个。分析句子可知,have seen作非谓语,与其逻辑主语he为主谓关系,故用现在分词形式,把Had改为Having。 第三处:考查副词。句意:但是当商贩看见Jim递给她的是100元钞票时,她摇了摇头。分析句子可知,商贩没有零钱,前后句为转折关系,故把Therefore改为However。 第四处:考查介词。句意:但是当商贩看见Jim递给她的是100元钞票时,她摇了摇头。分析句子可知,at the moment she saw the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to her.为the moment引导的时间状语从句,故去掉at。 第五处:考查名词。句意:商贩没有零钱。Change零钱为不可数名词,故把changes改为change。 第六处:考查时间状语从句。句意:他正准备放弃的时候,我拿出手机,扫描摊位上的二维码,支付了五元。本句为句型be about to do sth when正要做某事的时候突然,故把while改为when。 第七处:考查动词时态。句意:他正准备放弃的时候,我拿出手机,扫描摊位上的二维码,支付了五元。分享文章可知,本文陈述过去事情,故用一般过去时,把scan改为scanned。 第八处:考查形容词。句意:Jim非常惊讶。描述人的感受,用过去分词形式,故把surprising改为surprised。 第九处:考查代词。句意:我向他解释,如今在中国我们可以用手机买任何东西。Jim为男性,故用him,把her改为him。 第十处:考查比较级。句意:剪纸看起来很不错,但是支付方案更棒。分析句子,Jim对手机支付感到很惊讶,因而用比较级,把great改为greater。  
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