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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’m a high school students in China. History is one of my most favorite subjects. My friends always laugh me because they don’t understand why I’m such enthusiastic about history. They say it’s bored and it’s the useless subject. But I don’t think so. In their opinion, history taught us who we are and where we come from. I enjoy look back at points in the past and thinking about why certain decisions were making. I believe I can develop the skill of making decisions through studying history.

 

1. students→student 2. subject→subjects 3. 去掉my后的most 4. 在laugh和me之间加at 5. bored→boring 6. the→a 7. their→my 8. taught→teaches 9. look→looking 10. were后的making改为made 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章叙述了作者喜欢历史这门科目的原因。 第一处:考查名词。a后面接单数名词,故将students改为student。 第二处:考查形容词。favorite意为“最喜欢的”,它没有比较级和最高级,故most多余,应去掉。 第三处:考查介词。句意:我的朋友们总是嘲笑我,因为他们不明白为什么我对历史如此热衷。表示“嘲笑……”,应用laugh at,故应在laugh和me之间加上at。 第四处:考查副词。句意:我的朋友们总是嘲笑我,因为他们不明白为什么我对历史如此热衷。表示“如此”,such后应接名词。enthusiastic是形容词,前面应用副词so修饰。故将such改为so。 第五处:考查形容词。句意:他们说历史非常无聊。bored形容人的情感,形容事物的性质特点应用boring,故应将bored改为boring。 第六处:考查冠词。句意:他们说历史是一门没用的学科。subject是可数名词,该处指“一门学科”,应用不定冠词a。故将the改为a。 第七处:考查代词。下文叙述的是作者对历史的看法。故该处应指“在我看来”,故将their改为my。 第八处:考查时态和主谓一致。句意:历史教给我们我们是谁,我们来自何方。该句是对历史的客观介绍,故该句应用一般现在时态。且该句主语为history,谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。故应将taught改为teaches。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。enjoy后面接动名词作宾语,故将look改为looking。 第十处:考查语态。句意:我喜欢回顾过去,思考为什么会做出某些决定。make decisions意为“做决定”,decisions和make之间是被动关系,故该处应用被动语态。因此将making改为made。  
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