假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中 共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Released on 6 Aug. 2010,Flipped is arguably my favorite US film. It told the heartwarming story of a boy named Bryce or a girl named Juli. It's hard to imagine that two teenagers, who in others' eye might not know about love, actually have so a pure and beautiful love. Besides, the film is not only about puppy love. It also tells us about dreams, respect, self﹣esteem and the important of working hard. Julies attitude towards the life is also worth appreciating. She has characteristics many of us gradually lose with we grow up. The film successful creates a warm atmosphere for audiences longing love and happiness. I hope you will enjoy the movie as many as I do.
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式.
On Oct. 16, 2018, one of the two co﹣founders of Microsoft, Paul G. Allen, 1.(die) at age 65 from cancer.
When 2. comes to Microsoft, the first person we think of 3.(be) Bill Gates, the other co﹣founder of the firm. However, Allen was just as important to the 4.(create) of the company. Allen was,many people say,a much quieter person. He was content with the science side of things, while Gates has the 5.(good) head for business.
When the pair started Microsoft in the mid﹣1970s, they focused on the microcomputer industry. Microcomputers were small computers 6.(design) to be used in the home.
7. they lacked, though, was an operating system, which is where Microsoft came in. The company's big break came in 1980,8. Microsoft created the MS﹣DOS operating system. Later came Windows.
After Allen passed away. Bill Gates made a statement 9.(praise) Allen, "Even in high school, before most people knew what a personal computer was, Paul predicted that chips would get super﹣powerful and would 10.(eventual) give rise to a whole new industry.
Parents, they are here to clothe us, feed us and, embarrass us. Sixteen is a_____ ripe age for embarrassment and poor Rain Price of Utah was no_____It was the beginning of his high school year and his first time to_____the bus. So it was really embarrassing when his dad Dale_____him off. After school , he_____ his mom Rochelle to stop Dale from doing it again. Guess who overheard?
To Rain's_____,not only did the father decide to go on waving his son goodbye,_____he decided to send him off dressed in costume. But this wasn't a one﹣time_____:
Dale dressed up in different clothes every_____day for 170 straight school days,"When he did it the first day, I was in shock. You don' t want to see your dad dressing up in a wedding dress, waving at you on the_____." Rain told the Metro,to which his dad_____,"I hope this lives with him for the rest of his life." Dale made his_____goodbye on and on, from the Little Mermaid to the Wonder Woman.
Dale became_____as the "Wave At The Bus Dad'',coming out in the most strange and funny costumes and never repeating the same_____ He said he only spent around $ 50 the whole year and relied on friends and neighbors to_____ him costume and other materials. So the family could_____ the incidents with the rest of the world. Rochelle created a blog to_____ all the costumes.
Rain is now all grown up at 19. He still_____ Dale as a blushing bride, "In the end, it was just_____.I was laughing on the bus the whole way. I am_____ of him.
1.A. hopefully B. slightly C. particularly D. quietly
2.A. use B. way C. excuse D. exception
3.A. ride B. see C. follow D. choose
4.A. kissed B. waved C. hugged D. chased
5.A. ordered B. begged C. advised D. persuaded
6.A. joy B. sorrow C. relief D. disappointment
7.A. and B. but C. so D. while
8.A. event B. incident C. accident D. affair
9.A. other B. busy C. single D. happy
10.A. bus B. bike C. subway D. train
11.A. stuck B. objected C. responded D. adapted
12.A. special B. beautiful C. considerate D. valuable
13.A. regarded B. treated C. scolded D. known
14.A. time B. look C. place D. location
15.A. hand B. show C. lend D. award
16.A. learn B. discuss C. share D. overcome
17.A. document B. house C. book D. name
18.A. doubted B. confused C. blamed D. remembered
19.A. fun B. popularity C. reputation D. complaint
20.A. critical B. confident C. ashamed D. proud
Are you happy with your appearance?1. "Almost all the girls with single﹣fold eyelids in our class have had double﹣eyelid operations,"Zeng, a Senior 2 student from Chengdu, told Xinhua. Zeng had the same surgery done this summer. 2.
From popular photo﹣editing apps to plastic surgery, it seems that large eyes, pale skin and a skinny body are the only standard for beauty these days. But can following this standard really make us feel good about ourselves?
3. According to Huxiu News,over six in ten girls choose not to take part in certain daily activities, such as attending school, because they feel bad about their looks. As much as 31 percent of teenagers avoid speaking up in class because they worry that others will notice their looks.
Many teenagers are upset about their appearance because they believe in unrealistic standards of beauty, experts say.4. Seeing all these things can make anyone believe that they^re too dark, too fat, too short, or too tall.
However, trying to live up to strict standards can make us feel anxious. What troubles us is not just our "imperfect" looks,but the fact that we criticize ourselves too much.
5. Plus﹣size models are being featured in some fashion shows. All of us should be just as confident as they are.
A.Beauty comes in all shapes and sizes.
B.Body image anxiety is common among teenagers.
C.Guys care just as much as girls do about their body image.
D.Some teenagers might feel negatively about their appearance.
E.She and many of her classmates believe bigger eyes look more beautiful.
F.It's not uncommon for teenagers to feel confident about their appearance.
G.Perfect faces and bodies are everywhere in advertising TV shows and social media.
Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg took out full﹣page ads in British and American newspapers on 21 March 2018 to apologize for a "breach of trust" in the Cambridge Analytical scandal, admitting the quiz app built by a university researcher that leaked Facebook data of millions of people in 2014 was a "breach of trust".
Since the scandal of Big Data broke, the public has become more aware and concerned about that their online behavior may be used for purposes to which they have not agreed. It contributes to the urgent need for better protection of personal information.
In China, apps enabling users to steal private information from Wi﹣Fi providers are generating serious privacy concerns.
An app can break home Wi﹣Fi, cryptographic Wi﹣Fi at commercial locations and even the Wi﹣Fi being used in China's foreign ministry building, according to a CCTV report. With the help of the app, the CCTV reporter entered the ministry's network.
Almost 100,000 Chinese users ranked Wi﹣Fi Master Key app 4.5 out of 5 at the Apple store for convenience. But the app secretly stores Wi﹣Fi information and serves like a mobile spy between users, a show reported. It lets users access everything that links with the Wi﹣Fi such as a provider,s Wechat contact information and phone numbers.
At the China Development Forum, Li Yanhong, CEO of domestic Internet services giant Baidu Inc.,said that many Chinese users are willing to trade privacy for convenience. Li′s remarks aroused heated debates on social networks, as there is too much convenience and too little privacy.
It's an age of Big Data. It′s an age when privacy is under threat. The users are in an inferior position compared with the companies, but the law should not allow an unlimited trade of privacy for convenience. A simple click on "I agree,' should not be considered an excuse for the service providers to collect, use, and store users' data, which must be better protected by the law.
1.What do the underlined words "breach of trust" in paragraph 1 probably mean?
A. Risk of trust
B. Report of trust.
C. Research of trust.
D. Betrayal of trust.
2.Why do many Chinese users support the Wi﹣Fi Master Key app?
A. It is convenient to use.
B. It can be used to protect privacy,
C. It can steal everything from others.
D. It is generating serious privacy concerns.
3.What is the author's attitude towards privacy protection?
A. Neutral.
B. Critical.
C. Indifferent.
D. Approving.
4.What can be a suitable title for the text?
A. The Future of Big Data
B. The Dark Side of Big Data
C. The Convenience of Big Data
D. The Pros and Cons of Big Data
We humans are a curious species. As NASA says on its website,"Humans are driven to explore the unknown, discover new worlds, push the boundaries of our scientific and technical limits,and then push further. "
And space exploration is where we\e been "pushing" our furthest curiosity.
The year 2019 began with two pieces of exciting space exploration news. On Jan. 3, China landed a spacecraft,Chang′e 4,on the moon's far side﹣the side we can′t see from Earth﹣for the first time in human history. And according to a report published on Jan. 9 in Nature, scientists from the Canadian Hydrogen Intensity Mapping Experiment (CHIME) detected repeated radio signals from a galaxy 1.5 billion light years away, possibly sent by intelligent aliens.
However, what,s even more exciting than the news is the fact that whenever speaking of space exploration, we forget our political and cultural differences﹣the things that so obsess us.
"When you go into space, you become part of this overall collective (集体)called ‘humanity, Ken Liu, Chinese﹣American sci﹣fi writer and translator,told Quartz website. "You′re no longer Chinese, American, Russian …Your culture is left behind. You're now just ‘humanity' with a capital ‘H'. "
This magic has worked all the way along our journey into space. When US astronaut Neil Armstrong (1930﹣2012)became the first human to set foot on the moon in 1969, for example,he told the world: "That's one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind, "Now, with Chang'e 4 touching down on new moon territory, China′s aim is to help scientists from around the world find out more about Earth's only satellite. And with the discovery of the CHIME astronomers, we ' re one step closer to answering a common question in science: "Are humans alone in the universe?"
It's true that we are a curious species. But instead of being curious about the "unknown", perhaps we're really more eager to "push further" our own human "boundaries" and "limits".
1.Which of the following is the discovery of the CHIME scientists?
A. A galaxy with intelligent aliens.
B. Repeated radio signals sent by intelligent aliens.
C. Repeated radio signals from a distant galaxy.
D. Radio signals from a galaxy several years ago.
2.Why does the author quote Ken Liu's words ?
A. To introduce the famous writer, Ken Liu.
B. To show that in space we are just humanity.
C. To emphasize that culture is not important.
D. To introduce the things that obsess us very much.
3.What does the author intend to do in paragraph 6?
A. Further confirm his opinion.
B. Add some background information.
C. Summarize the previous paragraphs.
D. Introduce a new topic for discussion.
4.What's the main idea of the text?
A. China takes the lead in space exploration.
B. Humans are not alone in the universe.
C. Space exploration is a common cause of mankind,
D. Humans desire to push the boundaries of scientific limits.