Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文． 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词．

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分．

Charlie Chaplin that was one of the greatest and widely loved silent movie star． In Britain and America people was feeling miserable because the bad economic situation． Charlie understood their problems． He used to walk around stiffly in large trousers and worn-out shoes， carry a walking stick． His character "the little tramp" was poor and homeless， but everybody loved him for his kind heart and the way which he dealt with his difficult situation． Charlie Chaplin made people to laugh at some of those terrible situations like be without food or money． He wrote and directed his own films serious and received an Oscar to his outstanding work．

Answer

1．去掉that

2．star→stars

3．was→were

4．because 后加of

5．carry→carrying

6．which→that 或在which前加in或去掉which

7．去掉to

8．be→being

9．serious→seriously

10．to→for

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章介绍了喜剧大师卓别林通过电影给人们带来笑声的故事。

第一处：考查句子结构。该句只有一个句子：Charlie Chaplin was one of the greatest and widely loved silent movie star。没有从句，故that多余，应去掉。

第二处：考查名词。one of后应接名词复数形式，意为“……之一”，故将star改为stars。

第三处：考查主谓一致。该句主语是people，是集体名词，谓语应用复数，故将was改为were。

第四处：考查介词。because是连词，后面接从句。the bad economic situation 是名词，because of后面接名词。故在because后面加上of。

第五处：考查非谓语动词。逗号后面是伴随状语， he和carry是主动关系，故用现在分词作状语。故将carry改为carrying。

第六处：考查定语从句。the way后面是定语从句，修饰the way，引导词在从句中作方式状语，故用in which/that/省略that，故可在which前加上in，或将which改为that，或去掉that。

第七处：考查动词用法。表示“使得某人做某事”，应用make sb. do结构，故to多余，应去掉。

第八处：考查动名词。like是介词，意为“像”，后面接动名词。故将be改为being。

第九处：考查副词。修饰动词directed用副词seriously。故将serious改为seriously。

第十处：考查介词。句意：因为杰出的工作获得奥斯卡奖。表原因，介词应用for，故将to改为for。