Question

假如你是李华，是红星外国语学校的学生会主席，根据双方约定，你们打算今年夏天去英国Studio School进行四个星期的学习和旅游．请你写信给Studio School，就下面事宜进行通告．

1．你们一行有30人，其中2位教师，18位男生，10位女生，希望他们安排home﹣stay家庭；

2．你们的计划为上午，上课，下午到图书馆学习，晚上自由活动，周末安排旅游，

3．盼望对方尽早发出正式邀请，以便办理正式手续．

注意：1．可以适当增减细节，使其连贯完整；

2．词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．

参考词汇：

办理手续go through all the procedures  正式邀请函formal invitation

Dear Sir，

I'm Li Hua， Chairman of the Students' Union of Hongxing Foreign Language School．

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Best wishes !

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sir,

I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Students' Union of Hongxing Foreign Language School. As is stated in the agreement, we plan to send 30 students and teachers to have a study tour in your school this summer. Now I'd like to say something about our visit. Also there's something that we'd like you to arrange for us.

Our group consists of two teachers and 28 students, of whom 18 are boys. It would be better if you could arrange host families so that we can have opportunities to practice our oral English. As for the activities, it is suggested we have English classes in the morning and study by ourselves in the library in the afternoon. In the evening we want to be free and do whatever we like. On Saturdays and Sundays, we'd like to visit some places of interest within the county.

I would appreciate it if you could send us your formal invitation as soon as possible so that we can go though all the procedures.

【解析】

请在此填写本题解析!

试题本篇书面表达属于英文书信，作文的写作要点已经给出，考生需要根据提示进行写作，必须涵盖所有要点，还要注意语篇的连贯性。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍一行30人并希望安排Home-atay家庭。2、计划安排。3、盼望对方尽早发出正式邀请，以便办理正式手续。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。

在第一段使用了使用了一个由as 引导的非限制性定语从句：As is stated in the agreement, we plan to send 30 students and teachers to have a study tour in your school this summer.和由that 引导的定语从句：Also there's something that we'd like you to arrange for us.。

在第二段对一行人的介绍，使用了一个非限制性定语从句：Our group consists of two teachers and 28 students, of whom 18 are boys和一个复杂句：It would be better if you could arrange host families so that we can have opportunities to practice our oral English. 本句中还使用了so th at…句型及if 引导的状语从句。

最后一段中的企盼中使用了would appreciate it if…句型，as soon as及so that 句型;I would appreciate it if you could send us your formal invitation as soon as possible so that we can go though all the procedures.

此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如： plan to do, have opportunities to practice our oral English., arrange for consists of,,study by ourselves, have opportunities to practice our oral English,study by ourselves, go through等的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。