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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last a month, we took an important examination, which was to prepare us better for the College Entrance Examination. Some got their satisfying scores while others were disappointed with the rank comparing with their efforts. Afterwards, not only do our teachers help us analyze the examination with appropriate and science methods but also our parents gave us more patience and encouragement. Then we managed to refresh us into a better state. Now we have really realized that the purposes of such an examination were to have a good grasp of the learned knowledge and helped us adapt the future examination better both skillfully and mentally. However, we firmly believe that we will face the next examination more positively and confidently. Though we devote ourselves to the study, we will realize our dream sooner or later.

 

去掉a comparing→compared do→did science→scientific us→ourselves helped→help adapt后加to However→Therefore/Thus Though→When/If dream →dreams 【解析】 本文为记叙文。上个月,我们参加了一场重要的考试,这是为了我们更好地准备高考。一些人得到了满意的成绩,而另一些人对排名感到失望,与他们的努力相比。后来,我们的老师不仅帮助我们用适当的科学的方法分析考试,而且我们的父母给了我们更多的耐心和鼓励。然后我们设法使自己恢复到更好的状态。我们坚信,我们将面对下一次考试更加积极和自信。如果我们献身于学习,我们迟早会实现我们的梦想。 第一处:考查冠词。固定短语:last month“上个月”。故去掉a 第二处:考查非谓语动词。此处the rank与their efforts是对比关系,应使用过去分词,意为“他们的排名与他们的努力对比”。故comparing改为compared。 第三处:考查时态。根据语境可知,此处描述的是上个月的事情,应使用一般过去时。故do改为did。 第四处:考查形容词。此处与and前的appropriate共同修饰methods,应使用形容词,意为“适当的科学的方法”。故science改为scientific。 第五处:考查代词。句意:然后我们设法使我们自己恢复到更好的状态。根据句意可知,此处应使用反身代词。故us改为ourselves。 第六处:考查不定式。此处与were to have是并列结构,此处省去了不定式符号,应使用动词原形。故helped改为help。 第七处:考查介词。句意:现在我们真正认识到,这样的考试的目的是为了更好地掌握所学的知识,帮助我们更好地适应未来的考试。固定搭配:adapt to“适应……”。故adapt后加to。 第八处:考查副词。根据语境,此处不是转折关系,而是因果关系,意为“因此,我们坚信,我们将面对下一次考试更加积极和自信。”故However改为Therefore/Thus。 第九处:考查连词。根据语境,此处不是让步关系,应为时间状语从句或条件状语从句,意为“当我们致力于学习的时候,我们迟早会实现我们的梦想”或者“如果我们致力于学习,我们迟早会实现我们的梦想”。故Though改为When/If。 第十处:考查名词复数。dream是可数名词,根据主语we及修饰词our可知,此处应使用名词复数。故dream 改为dreams。  
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