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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’m writing to congratulate you of your winning first prize in the English short novel competition recently.

I must say that I am not surprised when I heard from the good news. I know that you have practised written English novels in the past years. I’m delighted to see efforts have finally been paid off. By the way, I am also fond of writing shorter passages in English. What upsets you most is that I sometimes can’t find suitable word or expressions to make myself understood. Would you be kind enough to give me a few advice on improving this situation?

Congratulations again. I hope to get your reply as early as possibly.

 

of→on/for am→was written→writing efforts前面加上the/your 去掉been shorter→short you→me word→words few→little possibly→possible 【解析】 本文是一封书信,作者在信中庆祝对方在英文短篇小说比赛中获得一等奖并希望对方能够为自己提供一些写好英文短文的建议。 第一处:考查介词。句意:我写信祝贺你在英文短篇小说比赛中获得一等奖。congratulate sb on/for sth表示“为某事祝贺某人”,故of改为on/for。 第二处:考查时态。句意:我必须要说,听到这个好消息时我并不感到惊讶。heard表明此处使用一般过去时,故am改为was。 第三处:考查非谓语动词。句意:我知道你过去几年一直练习写英文小说。practise doing表示“练习做某事”,故written改为writing。 第四处:考查代词或冠词。句意:我很高兴看到你的努力最终有了回报。此处指“你的努力”,也可特指“练习写英文小说的努力”,故在efforts前面加上the/your。 第五处:考查语态。句意参考上题解析,pay off表示“有回报”时是不及物动词短语,没有被动语态,故删掉been。 第六处:考查形容词。句意:另外,我也喜欢用英语写短文。根据句意可知此处不表示比较意义,故shorter改为short。 第七处:考查代词。句意:困扰我的是,我找不到合适的词语和表达让别人明白我的意思。此处表示“困扰我”,故you改为me。 第八处:考查名词。句意参考上题解析,word是可数名词,与expressions 并列,此处用复数表示泛指,故word改为words。 第九处:考查a few和a little的区别。句意:你能给我一些改善这种情况的建议吗?a few修饰可数名词复数,a little修饰不可数名词,此处修饰不可数名词advice,故few改为little。 第十处:考查固定搭配。句意:我希望尽快收到你的回复。as+adj+as possible是固定搭配,表示“尽可能……的”,故possibly改为possible。  
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